Nicely done, although at times I was confused as to who was saying what. Also, it seemed that there were other-story details one was already supposed to know to fully grasp what was going on and who the OCs are (I know I'm guilty of that too in my fics); perhaps a recap at the beginning of stories set in this timeline/universe would be helpful?
And apparently LJ doesn't like the accent marks in the French dialogue...
I wouldn't say a lot of details were too need-to-know. It's a fair amount of window-dressing, though there are stories behind pretty much everything there.
Or, well.. there's one saga involving the origin of Sparta (devotee of Clio, disciple of Ares, Wonder Woman adversary) that I've got so far, and Muse/Rogue ficlets, but on a fair number of others I haven't gotten far beyond the fill-in-the-matrix stage, and Muse herself just created nearly half of them while she was out at the cottage. I also just didn't want to give away things that would spoil any ficlets that came before this. Eventually they'll get written down, but this seems a good jumping-on point because it was fresh for the Rogues as well.
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I'm glad this turned out ok, though looking back through it, it seems a bit manic. Eh well, practice for the next one, I suppose..
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Nicely done, although at times I was confused as to who was saying what. Also, it seemed that there were other-story details one was already supposed to know to fully grasp what was going on and who the OCs are (I know I'm guilty of that too in my fics); perhaps a recap at the beginning of stories set in this timeline/universe would be helpful?
And apparently LJ doesn't like the accent marks in the French dialogue...
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I wouldn't say a lot of details were too need-to-know. It's a fair amount of window-dressing, though there are stories behind pretty much everything there.
Or, well.. there's one saga involving the origin of Sparta (devotee of Clio, disciple of Ares, Wonder Woman adversary) that I've got so far, and Muse/Rogue ficlets, but on a fair number of others I haven't gotten far beyond the fill-in-the-matrix stage, and Muse herself just created nearly half of them while she was out at the cottage. I also just didn't want to give away things that would spoil any ficlets that came before this. Eventually they'll get written down, but this seems a good jumping-on point because it was fresh for the Rogues as well.
And thank you! I really appreciate your thoughts.
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