BETA READA!!!

[thanks4smokin]

Ok, now my loveeees.
I NEEDS A BETA READER. NOW. PLZ!

For my D.Gray-Man fanfiction, I just translated it into english O:<

Comments

[bloodi_corset]

Any requirements? I would love to do it.

[thanks4smokin]

Really? What would be awesome!

There are not requirements except that you're a native speaker of English ♥ it's a laviyuullen + gay!sweater with very small amounts of p0rn.

In case you're interested here's the link http://www.savefile.com/files/1857011 I already checked the spelling but I'm not sure if the way I write some things is right.

THANK YOU SO MUCH ♥♥♥ You can have me/my mind/my body whenever you want

[bloodi_corset]

awesome! I just happen to be a native of the english language~ Give me a day though, I have to work today...

[bloodi_corset]

also...*takes internet virginity* Nyahurhur. >3

[failedpaperdoll]

X'D Urgh, I'm afraid I don't know english so well (writing is not like listening or reading T-T). But, if you want, I can translate them into italian XD or maybe german... from both spanish and english.
XD Don't really know why you could want it, but I intend-!

[thanks4smokin]

OMG ♥ but wouldn't it be too conceited of me to translate it into so many languages?

Well, I'll have some help translating into proper english and then if you like it, then I'll ask you to translate it for me? ♥ In italian? ♥♥

[failedpaperdoll]

Well, I think that translate them is not conceited. <3 I find it would be kind, because , this way, more people can read your stories without finding the obstacle of the language.
Yeah, I would love to help you to translate them <3<3 I'm here for you, when you need me *v*

[thanks4smokin]

Don't worry, I will annoy you humbly ask for your help then when the english version is finished, and I really have to say that...

OMG YOU'RE SO DAMN CUTE ♥!

Are you sure we cannot pretend that you're not taken and that I'm not married?

[nice_lena]

Si es en inglés, no puedo ayudarte ;_; Te deseo suerte u.uU Haz lo que tengas que hacer para conseguir un beta, if you know what I mean ;)

[thanks4smokin]

En eso estoy >3 raaaaaawr. And of course I know what you mean, I may know it better than you! ♥

[nice_lena]

*se asusta* ;_;

[heartbeatxx]

FFFFF I HAVEN'T TALKED TO YOU SINCE AGES D:
Yes that's right you go posting away during my hiatus XD. Aw I feel bad ;O;

[thanks4smokin]

Don't worry ♥

Hiatus. Been there D:

[heartbeatxx]

I still feel bad though D:
So how's life and everything? &hearts

*winces and hides*

[bloodi_corset]

I feel like a total bitch because it took so long, but I finished your story!
Kyaan...don't be mad!
Overall, it was good. Few grammatical errors and tense errors.

http://www.savefile.com/files/1869193

I suggest looking it over with your original document in case I changed something that you didn't want. Otherwise, I can go back and highlight everything I changed. Thank you again for this opportunity and sorry it took so long!!

Re: *winces and hides*

[thanks4smokin]

Thank you so muuuuuuch~ ♥

I can't believe I made such silly mistakes in grammar LOL. This looks just fine, I think I'm gonna post it right now.

THANKSTHANKSTHANKSTHANKS ♥ You own my heart and my soul and my body