Criminal

Mar 20, 2011 22:12



Title: Criminal.
Pairing: Jiyong/Seungri
Rating: PG13
Summary: When a boy will break a boy just because he can.
 ( they're taking turns )

g-ri, fic, fandom: big bang

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stupidefleurk March 20 2011, 21:05:08 UTC
I instantly throught about Fiona apple when I read the title.It's been a long time since I listened to it :)

I love your incoherence lol I mean sometimes I read fics of wannabe Baudelaire with bunch of metaphors everywhere but it just..doesn't make any sense :|
But in your case,even though it seems incoherent at first,it seems easy to find the true meaning of your words.
It also gives an incredible intensity *_*
Anyway,I really loves it,you have a lot of talent :D

and god, Seunghyun, why did you ever pick a fight with a mythical creature
LMAO I had to laugh at this

Ya you're listening to gri's song wedding lol

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thankyouandyou March 21 2011, 15:21:07 UTC
Yes, the wedding song, how could I not listen to it!!
Thank you very much for your comment, it made me smile like an idiot. I'm glad you can see through all this incoherence- I'm constantly afraid things only make sense in my head.
And weeeee you know fiona apple's criminal, me is happy! ^^

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unactivist March 20 2011, 21:20:49 UTC
oh, jesus fuck, angst never hurt so good. this is poetic, tragic, and hopeful all in one. i can't even. ♥

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thankyouandyou March 21 2011, 15:12:13 UTC
Wow, thank you! This means so much, coming from you. I love your writing so much i could EAT it, even though i've always been too chickenshit to comment on any of your fics- your awesomeness is a little intimidating.

So yeah, thank you, again, I'm so happy you took the time to read and comment. :)

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unactivist March 21 2011, 15:31:25 UTC
LOL THE LEVEL OF ADORABLENESS THAT YOU ARE, I AM MELTING. You deserve praise, baby, because this really was amazing. :)


... )

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thankyouandyou March 21 2011, 16:25:21 UTC
asdfdadsgdf, you're too awesome, thanks <3

(oh and haaai, third favorite supernatural hug!)

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oxygenlove March 25 2011, 13:27:38 UTC
I can't with you just what are you I mean uh there is. Yes.

Wow, the power play in this is just wow. I swear, one minute i know what you're saying and the next line you throw everything right back to my face and at the end it just blows up and -

Dead.

Not yet though, not now, the hurting one is you now, and god, Seunghyun, why did you ever pick a fight with a mythical creature, little guys only win in fairytales.
GOLD.

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thankyouandyou March 27 2011, 12:33:19 UTC
Thank you soooo much!!!! <3 <3

I'm glad you liked it, and that all the incoherence didn't put you off- I swear this fic had a mind of its own, I mean, wtf, shoelaces?! But I was shameless enough to post it, so. :) :)

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oxygenlove March 27 2011, 16:52:39 UTC
never not be shameless bb :)) it's endearing.

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papersanguine April 3 2011, 20:29:50 UTC
Holy hell that was epic and beautiful. I wish i had better words, but it was seriously stunning!

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thankyouandyou April 5 2011, 07:03:21 UTC
Thank you very much for reading! I'm glad you liked it. :) :)

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idylliccliches May 5 2011, 01:48:23 UTC
Whoa.
Wow I think I really like this,
Your writing is like poetry almost,
don't worry, it's those things in life that don't make sense that're the most beautiful :)
Your writing is the epitome of cool
Though that crude slang like definition doesn't seem at all an apt description for what you just wrote
:) LOOVE THIS
>

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thankyouandyou May 24 2011, 22:10:05 UTC
I'm reeeally sorry for how late my reply is- especially since your comment made me ridiculously happy when I read it. But you know, life, school, argh- ok. So, thank you, for taking the time to read. And for your wonderful comment. It made my day -20 days ago, but really, it did.

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idylliccliches May 25 2011, 03:59:50 UTC
Lol that's alright. We must keep you happy after all... (so you can keep writing... har har) But honestly, I really do envy your writing style.
Funny really, sometimes I finish your stories, and I say I love it, I really really really love it, but then I realize I've forgotten what you've written about, because honestly, there's so much crammed in your stories my brain just takes it all in like it's a chocolate desert mixed with all sorts of flavouring, and it tastes so good, but then after the aftertaste is gone, I can't remember what it's about. But that's alright, because then I can read your stories over and over again.
:) I just read your most recent one, so I'm kind rambling right now. You make me so jealous ;___;

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