Separation Anxiety

Apr 10, 2011 21:20

Title: Separation Anxiety
Pairing: Jiyong/Seungri
Rating: PG13
Summary: Of dragons and cages and flawed hearts.

listen to that frenzied thing )

g-ri, fic, fandom: big bang

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gauzeling April 12 2011, 03:29:37 UTC

I'm scared of how good this is. Everything is perfect, the inclusion of myths and heartbreaks and everything in between. I can't find the words to say how much I love this but really and truly; wonderful work. I've always loved reading your works. :)

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thankyouandyou April 12 2011, 13:43:56 UTC
and I loveloveLOVE reading yours :)

thank you for reading.

(PS there's something i wanted to say about your last gri and forgot to mention in my comment: the title. that wayward tree-hunded percent environment friendly. i don't know, i just loved it, it was so clever.)

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brandy_cognac April 16 2011, 04:27:12 UTC
Can I translate it into Vietnamese?
I like this fic ^^
I'm sure it will be full credit.

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stupidefleurk April 16 2011, 15:52:33 UTC
When I saw "thankyouandyou posted a new entry on gdheartri" in my mailbow I let out a big "waaaa" XD

I had to write an essay about this myth in greek a little while ago so I really like that you use the myth without being cheesy,because this myth is far from being cheesy :)
Anyway I loved it !

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thankyouandyou April 16 2011, 16:02:29 UTC
thank you! ^^
i was really, uh, hesitant about using the myth, because, you know, it's plato. and you don't wanna mess with plato. plus despite being greek myself, i am not veeeery familiar with the symposium. embarrassing, yeah, but what can you do.
thanks for reading, again!

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suspirando April 18 2011, 11:44:10 UTC
Poetry<3 I love reading things like this. I don't even know where to start, I'm just wrapped up in it. I love your style and disregard of punctuation lolol. It reads in one breath and you get that desperation, that hurried feeling in your chest because the air is simply not enough- you get that feeling that you think Jiyong might be feeling. Never enough, this game. such a great piece, thanks for sharing~

He’s saying I was here all along, I was here ages waiting for you, the wind has blown holes in my bones and they howl for you.

favorite line!

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thankyouandyou April 20 2011, 11:49:56 UTC
thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment! i'm glad you liked this, despite the lack of punctuation and, uh, coherency. and i'm also glad you liked that one line it's a favorite here too :) :)

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ext_603028 May 23 2011, 18:53:20 UTC
I don't even know the myth but I don't think it mattered?? Epic. Epic. I think every line was my favorite. I siad I's read all your stuff, but for now I'm just reading the g-ri cos - well, I'm a junkie!Kk.
Thank you for your beautiful writing.

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thankyouandyou May 24 2011, 22:12:52 UTC
haha, i'm a gri junkie too, no worries! ^^
thanks for reading.

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