Title: Shakespeare In Braille. Author: thankyouandyou Rating: PG13 Summary: This strange new language. Note: Did I just write fluff? Did I just- *faints*
oh wow, you DID write fluff! It's not your usual thing but it was lovely! I really like how you write little details that make it seem like you really really get them <3
yeah, look at it, it's fluff! I don't know who I am anymore. thanks for reading love, and for your comment. ♥ and yeah, self-indulgent little details to give the writerperson the impression that she knows shinee... :P *le sigh*
dude, i LOVE the idea that they are preparing to go bungee jumping. loveLOVE it. i sort of felt that way about them too, so. ugh. yeah, ok, I stop, embarrassment over.
Same feeling, the feeling of soaring and fleeting. I don't know if it's because this is my first impression about this couple, but I think it fits them very well XD
Minho moves, presses him against the wall and speaks to him slow in this strange new language, like calming down a wild horse. Or in this case a short legged pony.
this part. i don't know if it's just me but i read and re-read it and still find it hilarious. i love this. i love the imagery, all the little details and the way you phrase situations. all pretty tiny moments encapsulated into something so much more.
This sounds so good in my head! Like, it narrates superbly. I don't know if you meant it but Key stands out as a catalyst in a totally lovely way. The only thing that bothered me a little was that the characterization stems from the situation and not the other way around but I don't think this would've worked otherwise?
The concept and the style are also really good, but normally people tend to get carried away. You have restraint though, I hope you keep it. I really enjoyed this.
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thanks for reading love, and for your comment. ♥
and yeah, self-indulgent little details to give the writerperson the impression that she knows shinee... :P *le sigh*
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Why do I feel like they are preparing to do bungee jumping in this one. I guess it's a nice feeling to do bungee with your love one. XD
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thanks for reading!! :)
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http://paranoiascreams.livejournal.com/50400.html
Same feeling, the feeling of soaring and fleeting. I don't know if it's because this is my first impression about this couple, but I think it fits them very well XD
JJong bb approved my impression lol
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i got mentioned here.
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Minho moves, presses him against the wall and speaks to him slow in this strange new language, like calming down a wild horse. Or in this case a short legged pony.
this part. i don't know if it's just me but i read and re-read it and still find it hilarious. i love this. i love the imagery, all the little details and the way you phrase situations. all pretty tiny moments encapsulated into something so much more.
thank you for writing this. ♥
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Thank you for reading this silly blob of fluff ♥ ♥
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Ugh, bby, your writing. Flawless, beautiful, like always.
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The concept and the style are also really good, but normally people tend to get carried away. You have restraint though, I hope you keep it. I really enjoyed this.
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