green onions

[thankyouandyou]

Title: Green Onions
Pairing: Jonghyun/Minho
Rating: PG13
Note: Another one of those not-lighthearted stories. You've been warned.

Comments

[ericaslade]

I'm in love with the first line of the fic, have been since you posted it on fb, I've been thinking about it and drinking beer and listening to Laura Marling, and now I've read the fic and I'm punched in the face like I always am when I read your stuff.

""But they didn’t listen, when do they ever listen? They shut the windows and locked the doors to keep us in, covered the walls in mirrors so we could haunt their bedrooms and they wouldn’t forget those liquid eyes and your long legs. And now we’re trapped because they love us too much, like we were trapped because I loved you too much, enough to wait three years to steal one kiss in a rehearsal."

Ah,I can say no more.
I adore it.

[rainstormraider]

DAYUM.
I want someone to write a love-letter like this one to me.
Kibum would be such a jealous fatty.

[thankyouandyou]

hahah, what a loveletter! arsenic and ghosts and chopped fingers oh my!

thank you for reading!!

[chaeii]

oh. oh
that was gorgeous.

I love how the whole piece is so lyrical and romantic(not in the romance but in the euphemism sort of way). From the first line, the fic captures my attention and holds on to it right to the end. I am pretty much incoherent right now(it's 430am lmao) and I would probably just go on and on. This fic is amazing and gorgeous and I adore, adore, adore your writing style. jealous, even.
♥

[thankyouandyou]

THANK YOU SO MUCH!

i'm completely useless at replying to lovely comments such as yours- i get so very awkward and stammer-y, it's ridiculous. Just know that it made my day and thank you *again*.

[colorfulgrey]

I'm not a Jongho shipper, but this fic is so damn beautiful. I love how you used the picture prompt and kinda changed the obvious idea behind it. Thanks to you I understood that you can interpret everything the way you want and change it into something else entirely even though the main idea stays the same. I mean, you see a wedding ring and think about a proposal and, in fact, you wrote about a proposal, but the idea where he will get the ring from is so great, I was totally stunned.
Good job! （＾ｖ＾）

[sarazaretta]

My god, you made me cry so much. This is perfection, really, I don't have any other words to explain this.

[thankyouandyou]

wow, thank you so much!! *hands handkerchief* i'm glad you liked it, sorry it made you cry :(

love the userpic by the way! koi ga bokura no yurusu hani, right? ^__^

[sarazaretta]

but that was a good way to cry ù___ù
and yeah! you're one of the few people that know motoni modoru, I think I'm gonna love you *A*

[thankyouandyou]

*huggle attack*
i looooove her!! dog style is in my top three favorite yaoi, and I love koi ga bokura to tiny bits and pieces.