Comments | thankyouandyou: i'm gonna lose my mind, so no-one can remind me

thankyouandyou

i'm gonna lose my mind, so no-one can remind me

Mar 03, 2012 18:17

Title: Shelter
Pairing: Jiyong/Seungri
Rating: PG-13
Summary: He misses each train and sits back down, knowing his shoes are too big, his suitcase empty but large enough to fit one person.
Notes: AU: The one where the boys are in a rock band! Has it been done before? I bet it has.

( ...don't you think it's time we left already? )

g-ri, fic, fandom: big bang

Comments 22

loserforya March 5 2012, 07:09:33 UTC

So yeah this is a little confusing but i like it :D and idk if you did this on purpose or not but i keep coming back to these parts:

And Seungri’s transported, he imagines his hair winding in soft thick curls under his ears and not in those tight spirals that bounce over his forehead, and he imagines Jiyong threading fingers through them, holding on.

You crazy dog, Jiyong breathes, runs his fingers through Seungri’s straight black hair, pushes it back, but can’t hold on, they slip right through. You crazy fucking dog, and his lips drag across the plains of Seungri’s cheekbones, his straight nose.

idk hahaha does it even have a connection?! xD

thankyouandyou March 5 2012, 08:40:50 UTC

Yes, it does have a connection, well spotted! Glad you caught it, didn't think it was noticeable to anyone but me!

Thank you for reading! ^_^

mykou March 5 2012, 20:47:33 UTC

Really good job! the story is amazing, and the flow was completely on. I love that this is almost poetry.

thankyouandyou March 7 2012, 11:07:57 UTC

Thank you so much! This story has been a pain, glad to see it worked after all. :)

heads_bang March 6 2012, 22:53:28 UTC

god this is so lovely. gri is not even my otp but you're starting to change that. the push and pull of their relationship and the way you write....just ugh

thanks so much for sharing, ill definitely be sure to read your other works~

thankyouandyou March 7 2012, 11:14:27 UTC

yes yes, make gri your otp, i love them so and you should love them too!! let's drown in the gri love.

( ... )

41551947105 March 9 2012, 17:54:02 UTC

People like you make me give up hope on ever being a decent writer myself, gawd. And that's not meant to be nearly as depressing as it sounds, since it's supposed to be a compliment and all... and... lord. Where do I begin to I describe the amount of awesome this radiates? :'D

thankyouandyou March 10 2012, 10:01:19 UTC

....hey hey hey, what are you talking about? I just read Interconnected and it is way more than decent writing, so don't give me that! :P Your writing's great and you must know it!

Thank you very much for reading! And keep writing! Write us some gri too, will you?

41551947105 March 15 2012, 15:20:36 UTC

Haha, don't worry I'll keep writing, after the first five minutes of despair it becomes really motivating and all~

Also, Interconnected is a happy accident, the other drabbles are worse, but I'm really honoured that you like it xD

I'm trying to tackle Ri's personality, but that boy is confusing the hell out of me. Whenever I start to write something with him, he wants to go NC-17. Don't make me go there, Ri! D: