Comments | tharivol000: Some... Thing.

tharivol000

Some... Thing.

Apr 08, 2008 20:03

So, a couple things to post about tonight. First, on May 4th, I'll be going to my first concert. I'll be going to see Apocalyptica in Philly, which I think will be fun. It'll be an experience at the very least. I've never been to many concerts other then little things at like... Coffee shops ( Read more... )

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lacrimawanders April 9 2008, 08:31:59 UTC

I don't think you have to change it, unless you really want to. But I would change the punctuation in that last sentence to a question mark.

If you wanted to be clever about it, you could change it from vignette to some sort of music-related term, but be careful...that can get cutesey.

tharivol000 April 9 2008, 23:20:53 UTC

Thank you for pointing that one punctuation thing out, I had completely not noticed that I hadn't put a question mark there at all xD

A music related term instead of vignette could work, though I agree, if I'm not careful it will seem a little too silly. If I were to choose a music related term off the top of my head, I'd probably go with something like "1st Movement" and so on, or "Verse 1." I'll definitely think about it.

Thanks again ^_^