I laughed immaturely at "flaccid organ." Not sure why.
Poor Momoka. She has such a weak constitution. Can't even look at a man's penis without fainting. *pets her* Though I don't blame her for throwing up at the nasty man smell. They obviously didn't think about deodorant when they left their apartments that morning, and she had to suffer the consequences.
I do like the ending, though I can't really...see the tweaks that you made since I can't remember the old/unedited version. XD But nekkid!Renji suits mah fancy just fine, even if I don't want Bleach anymore. (Though why is it named Bleach anyway? That never made sense to me.)
Re: Bow chicka bow wowthat_charm_tartJuly 19 2009, 07:09:44 UTC
Because is sounds like some some weird instrument that you blow on or fiddle with like some sort of flute?
....wait.... ¬___¬;
It's all right, the tweaks were just small grammar/tense stuff that I just gave up on because it was... just awkwardly done I think. Y_v; idk.
The last time I checked, like over a year ago, no one knows why it was named Bleach. Speculations range from Ichigo's hair looks like a bad bleach job, to the captain's white uniforms, or how they removed hollows(or was it spirits) is kinda like is purifying and like bleach? IDK. Just a brain hurtin' thing. ._.;
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Poor Momoka. She has such a weak constitution. Can't even look at a man's penis without fainting. *pets her* Though I don't blame her for throwing up at the nasty man smell. They obviously didn't think about deodorant when they left their apartments that morning, and she had to suffer the consequences.
I do like the ending, though I can't really...see the tweaks that you made since I can't remember the old/unedited version. XD But nekkid!Renji suits mah fancy just fine, even if I don't want Bleach anymore. (Though why is it named Bleach anyway? That never made sense to me.)
Yus! :D
*gives you flowers* =^-^=
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....wait.... ¬___¬;
It's all right, the tweaks were just small grammar/tense stuff that I just gave up on because it was... just awkwardly done I think. Y_v; idk.
The last time I checked, like over a year ago, no one knows why it was named Bleach. Speculations range from Ichigo's hair looks like a bad bleach job, to the captain's white uniforms, or how they removed hollows(or was it spirits) is kinda like is purifying and like bleach? IDK. Just a brain hurtin' thing. ._.;
o_o ^_^ <3 *makes flower crowns*
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