Moving Forward - Kick Ass/Red Mist

May 07, 2010 18:09

Title: Moving Forward
Rating: R, violence, language, and h/c.
Pairing: Crave (Chris/Dave) and Kist (Kick Ass/Red Mist)
Summary: "But it ain't how hard you hit; it's about how hard you can get hit, and keep moving forward. How much you can take, and keep moving forward." - Rochy
Notes: Dedicated in its entirety to seeingrightly , whose conversation in the pairing ( Read more... )

rated: r, fic, pairing: dave lizewski/chris d'amico, fandom: kick ass

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nix_this May 8 2010, 04:12:06 UTC
Uh oh. I'm officially vulnerable to your charms now. I TRUST you - as demonstrated by the fact that you made me read a fic for a fandom I know nothing about :D
Haven't seen Kick-Ass, was only peripherally aware of it (at best) and here I am! Giddy with love ^.^
Can't say anything about characterization BUT you made me giggle a couple of times (hitting below the belt *snort* sorry I blew up your dad with a bazooka, but he was an asshole anyway! *snicker*)
Then the whole bit about Kick Ass ratcheting up the comfort in bemusement was kind of adorable XD
Also, I loved their awkward Whedon-centric conversation in their real lives, I like how Chris started it - all fumbling and kind of sad - and how Dave just went with it. It set up the alley scene very well and paved the way for tasty-tasty slash!
So yay for you! More please?
Or, you know, more Zombieland ^.^

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that_last_stop May 8 2010, 05:27:41 UTC
I am officially in love with all of your reviews. You make me the happiest person in the universe. I can't believe I tempted you into a fic you haven't seen the movie to :p

The Buffy thing was actually snagged from the comics. Dave says he's "numero uno Buffy maniac" xD I'm not very good at reconciling between comic and movie verses, but I couldn't resist that.

You neeeeed to see the movie. Because if you were to get into the Kick Ass fandom then my existence would truly be complete.

I'm soooo glad you liked it, and there's definitely more to come!

More Zombieland too ;D

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tessisamess May 8 2010, 05:50:03 UTC
Wonderful work, hon --and similar in some strange ways to the RP I've got going. Go figure.

Seriously cannot wait for more from you. ♥

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that_last_stop May 8 2010, 05:53:28 UTC
Oh, I wish I was in a Kick Ass rp, you lucky devil! ;)

Glad you liked it!

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that_last_stop May 8 2010, 06:09:14 UTC
Okay, see, now I'm downloading aim, because I am incapable of refusing such an offer.

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that_last_stop May 9 2010, 04:10:22 UTC
IT WAS ALL FOR YOU.

You're influencial.

Sososososo glad you enjoyed it. :D There is no easy and happy ending with these two for me. I can have one or the other, but both is just too selfish :P

<3<3<3<3

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fatal_scribbles May 10 2010, 21:17:22 UTC
That was indescribably good. The first one to tackle the whole I-killed-your-dad issue and I'm so glad it was this that I read because this is my canon now. I have no words to describe how perfect this was. Have my love instead; ♥

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that_last_stop May 10 2010, 23:42:58 UTC
♥I'm so glad you liked it!♥

I can't believe I made your canon! -is all flattered 'n' stuff-

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charakitai June 2 2010, 17:50:28 UTC
So, this was a while a ago, but I thought I'd pop in with a litte comment anyhow.

Because I thorougly enjoyed this fic! Your dialogue flows like water, and I loved your Dave, the maturity and seriousness you've given him corresponding to the things he's been through. They are both so very human and three-dimensional.

And I loved the unspoken quality to it, all that stands between the words, in the spaces of the text.

Also, I have to disagree with dave, I kinda like it when they cry... *feels bad*

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