Is this pic finished?

Jul 27, 2012 07:01

I have this pic in progress on the oekaki board and once I upload it (and clear the space for another multi-session pic on the board) I won't be able to edit it there, so I want to make sure it's like I want before I quit on it.

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deckardcanine July 27 2012, 13:41:59 UTC
D'awww. All I can suggest is cropping at the left and top.

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tatoeba_tadayou August 1 2012, 22:53:08 UTC
My three suggestions would be to add some texture to the ground (even pavement has texture), some deeper/defining shadows on the kitty, and yes, to include something to the left! maybe a sign that indicates a loading area, caution, no parking, a pipe or hydrant?

oooor maybe even the lid for the box! or another box! shipping pallettes! :0

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