fic: it's a fire [block b; zbomb, jaeco, jaebomb; nc-17]
it's a fire
block b; zbomb, jaeco, jaebomb; nc-17; 3000
minhyuk is black smoke, curling around jiho like a claw, choking.
( There is a fine line, Jiho thinks, between what it is he needs and what it is he wants. )
block b; zbomb, jaeco, jaebomb; nc-17; 3000
minhyuk is black smoke, curling around jiho like a claw, choking.
( There is a fine line, Jiho thinks, between what it is he needs and what it is he wants. )
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i've told you, i looooove this to pieces. there's so much imagery that's so complex and layered, but still simple at the same time? i think it's so lovely that even when we're not sure what's going on with minhyuk, the feeling overrides the sort of linear consciousness we expect to hold onto and just permeates everything. it's so overwhelming but in a really, really good way. (this comment is so wtf talk, lol sorry bb.) yes i just. i love it, and i love how fragile jiho and jaehyo both are, even while jiho's trying to protect jaehyo. and the ending, minhyuk you creep 8(
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anyways, THANKYOU. your comment made me gigglecry ;_______; when you fancy critique talk to me, it is the most beautiful :'(
BIBUM IS THE CREEPIEST. i love how we stan him so hard yet...we tend to give him the creepiest roles in our fic .____. what does this even mean.
really i am just ridiculously glad you loved this for all it's pretentiousness lol
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This was so... I just have no words, I love it so much ;~; Your characterizations were interesting and different and the story is blatant and yet there are so many ways you allow the readers' minds to be able to take it. It's so confusing and lovely when you try to make sense of it and all those adjectives are pure love.
When he wakes up, white hospital walls blending into white hospital floors blending into white hospital sheets into white ghosts lingering through Jiho’s mind like phantom fingers hovering over his skin, Jiho feels a pair of eyes on him.
His head reels, the outline of a man blurring between his watery eyes, the sound of his voice garbled but Jiho feels bubbling fear at his presence. There is a frantic rushing need to get away, to run away but Jiho’s legs won’t move, heavy and stiff, and bound tight as if Jiho were already in a coffin.These lines were two amazing lines ( ... )
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PLEASE STOP I CAN'T DEAL WITH SUCH LOVELY COMMENTS
omg, ;_____; thankyou so much, thankyou. the first line you quoted is maybe my favourite in the fic. lol but just, i'm so glad you thought this was raw and sinister because that's exactly what i was going for!
just ♥ ty so much for this comment.
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;♥;
SAYS THE LOVELY AND INCREDIBLE AUTHOR
oh it's my pleasure bb, just trying to spread the facts around :D lol tbh who wouldn't love that line? bb you couldn't have created any more of a masterpiece! ( please write more fics like these ;A; i'll give you cookies and my internets how can you say no :D )
i cannot even- i'm just glad you got my love ♥♥
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