Comments | thatdayismine: fic: oppa [block b; jaeco; nc-17]

thatdayismine

fic: oppa [block b; jaeco; nc-17]

Dec 13, 2011 23:29

oppa
block b; jaeco; nc-17; 2600
jiho's such a good boy. really, he is.

( Jaehyo sprawls out on Jiho’s bed like it’s his and not Jiho’s. )

!fanfic, what has my life become, pairing: jaehyo/jiho, that time when i fail at writing porn, !oneshot

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thatdayismine December 14 2011, 22:43:44 UTC

you are the strangest nana, the strangest u____u i am glad we live in a cloud with all our pets.

omg i love bossy jaehyo so much and the oppa kink is, i love it *____* lol

I MIGHT JUST HAVE TO QUIT SCHOOL.

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thatdayismine December 14 2011, 22:45:21 UTC

/lets you love me and ensures your brain stop leaking

THANKYOU FOR THIS LOVELY COMMENT but please, take care of your brain okay ): ♥

themadpoker December 14 2011, 16:51:42 UTC

-waves hi- I think you're probably better at writing porn than you think? You seemed to be doing okay from what I read of this. Idk, I'm the opposite of an authority, most of the time I skip the porn while reading fic.

This comment had pretty much no point other than I like commenting on your posts.

thatdayismine December 14 2011, 22:46:35 UTC

CLEARLY, ZEINEB. CLEARLY.

writing porn is quite hard but i write so much that i believe you. what is my life.

themadpoker December 14 2011, 23:10:32 UTC

Okay so I tried actually reading most of it and Nav. Nav. It makes me want to giggle because it's so clearly your writing style and idk. Weird world clash! You still have the sentence structure and word preferences I remember from editing your fic in high school! I could read this an anon meme and be like NAV WROTE THIS immediately! I don't even know why this is so funny to me.

themadpoker December 14 2011, 23:42:56 UTC

You know what PWPs do to me Nav? They turn me into a dick. For example, there's this author who is an excellent writer and I basically wait like this *____________* for each update of this long AU she is writing but whenever she posts a porny oneshot I read it and mock it in my head. A VELVETY VOICE YOU SAY? So his voice is a soft cloth akin to those one dark blue pajamas I had that one time. Okay. Okay. Sounds sexy. And by sexy I mean these dudes should just go to bed now. Why would you bang when you could sleep, make better life choices.

I am terrible at fandom.

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grapefruitade December 15 2011, 04:22:11 UTC

LOL your tag... that time when I fail at writing porn I see no fail here. none at all. all I see is hnnnnngh and unfffffff.
my lack of coherent and eloquent diction aside, seriously... damn. this was just all kinds of attractive, haha. dominant!jaehyo was hot, needy!jiho was hot, and good lord don't get me started on your flawless incorporation of that "oppa" kink. /fans self
so... yeah. this. this was nice. *___*

hotpixel December 15 2011, 05:08:37 UTC

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you already know exactly how much i love this ;; BUT ALLOW ME TO SAY IT SOME MORE. I LOVE IT. crying over jiho spying on jaehyo, on jaehyo knowing. voyeurism is... 8( very naisu 8((( and even though i knew the oppa was coming, it still slayed me entirely ;_________; oppa OPPA good lord jiho calling anyone oppa is like, hottest ever, okay, the end. and jaehyo making him do it ;; bossy jaehyo is a+ you're a+ THIS IS A+

caught a lolzy typo though: "Jaehyo’s face is utterly flushed though, rips red" unless you were suddenly going for an engrish feel, ofc u__u