fic: clockwork [block b, bjae, nc-17]

[thatdayismine]

clockwork
block b; bjae; nc-17; 3100
jaehyo is the stretch of the sunset and minhyuk is a little more than just in love.

Comments

[hotpixel]

HI I LOVE THIS.

jaehyo shopping in the middle of the night; that's my favorite time to go grocery shopping too ;__; h8 other people, lol 8( and qt sick bb minhyuk needing jaehyo the most ;_____; and minhyuk being mad about his ruined sweater, lololol. and jaehyo being "nippy" oh god i laughed so much at the thought of him saying that one time and minhyuk side eyeing him and never forgetting about it;; and and and english professor ahn and lazy morning sex and minhyuk being irrational in the morning ALL MY TEARS, TAKE THEM ALL.

i love this. ty for writing it ;3;

[thatdayismine]

~EVERYTHING IS FOR NOONA~~~ even me.

domestic fic was kinda your fault anyways u___u

THE NIPPY BIT WAS MY FAVOURITE ;_____; jaehyo's just so cute and he would totally say something cute like that and minhyuk would tease him about it into oblivion.

i love you. ty for reading it ;3;

[pervertparade]

normal people actually own coffee machines? i thought they were only in cafés...i have been shamed

[pervertparade]

"Jaehyo thinks that Minhyuk’s been spending too much time with Yukwon. There will be words." - NAV, I CANNOT EVEN CRITICISE. SO MUCH FLAWLESS BEAUTEOUS SWEETLY BRILLIANT IHCBGFRYJUMGNFHGA\Z

also, i like how the height thing has become a motif in this. i'm not sure what it really signifies, if anything at all, but i like it anyway because HELLO RECURRING PHRASES THAT MAKE MY LIFE.

"Minhyuk’s not even that good at it but Jaehyo always makes sad, pathetic faces at him until he sits down to start playing. " - 8th section. apostrophes.

also, i'm not really clear about which, of jaehyo and minhyuk, is the dominant one. it feels like it's interchangeable. WHICH I LIKE, BY THE BYE. but also: "It is in these moments that Minhyuk regrets nothing, resents his father nothing, hurts only in the way his heart aches when Jaehyo smiles at him, just for him." - i love it, nav. what a lovely line, i <3 hearts. perfectly done

[ashxiii]

(chuckles0) Liking what I read. Thank god I'm persistent
in trying to find Jaehyo fics. The fact that Minhyuk is in them too with him makes it more than awesome.

(cups hands to an ears) I think I heard angels in a choir, singing you praises. (chuckles)

A good transition between fluffy and the nasty - and I meant the sex and not in a sucky way...though sucking was involved but in a good way, no? Jaehyo certainly wasn't complaining (smirks lecherously) - and back.

Thanks for the read.

[candiiez]

I don't understand how I'm still calm after reading that. I-I..I need a break.

*runs around my apartment, screaming like the freak I am*

This...thing is horribly cute. Everything was so fluffy. I can't keep calm. I can't. Argh! They were just so... Why are they so perfect? This couple drives me crazy. Asdfgghhjkkl!! Since I was reading on my iPod, I couldn't see the lengthy of the text. So, each time I was done reading a part, I scrolled down and saw it was still continuing and.. @-@  Why is your writing so beautiful? Demon.

Aish. I'm going crazy seriously, I'M TREMBLING.
It's not even smut, dammit. This fluffy thing is better than porn. *flips the world*

/bricked.

[such_a_sadsound]

/rolls over you crying tears of blood/ ;;u;;