Comments | thatdayismine: fic: give me a part of you, for a part of me [exo; kailay; nc-17]

thatdayismine

fic: give me a part of you, for a part of me [exo; kailay; nc-17]

Aug 03, 2012 15:10

give me a part of you, for a part of me
exo; kailay; nc-17; 5500
jongin thinks that yixing and he are just a broken mirror, shattered glass the only remnants of the impact. canon.
written for the exceedingly lovely, loudestoflove, happy birthday darling ♥ ily ♥

( Jongin can’t help it sometimes, eyes following Yixing’s body as it moves across the practise room... )

everything is nc-17, !fanfic, happy happy birthday to youuu, fandom: exo, pairing: jongin/yixing, !oneshot

Comments 54

laurent August 3 2012, 22:06:39 UTC

;______; perfect!! the angst was so good and the ending so sweet;;

thatdayismine August 4 2012, 23:55:48 UTC

sobs, thankyou so much ♥ i'm glad you like it!

yixxing August 3 2012, 22:16:19 UTC

oh wow i really enjoyed reading this! it's so hard finding good fics about them. it's hard finding fics about them in general to be honest. kaixing is my otp and it makes me so very happy to find well written fics about them. this was truly wonderful and i loved how you portrayed both of the characters and just thank you for this!

thatdayismine August 4 2012, 23:57:17 UTC

lkdjhfj thankyou so much for this lovely comment! i'm glad everything worked for you and kaixing is one of my fav otps, i love them!! again, thankyou ♥

jia028 August 3 2012, 22:52:22 UTC

More kaixing ;; ♥
If this is what you call word vomit then it'll be rainbows and unicorns,
that was really really really beautiful ♥

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thatdayismine August 4 2012, 23:57:59 UTC

cries thankyou so much, i'm glad you think it's so nice;; ♥

hiddenmeghanis August 3 2012, 22:58:51 UTC

uwah, this is so lovely
first of all, jongxing, yaaaaay
second of all, mostly realistic portrayal of relationships yaaaay
word vomit or not, i think it's spectacular <3
thank you for sharing!

thatdayismine August 4 2012, 23:59:22 UTC

!!! omg, it makes me super happy to know you thought it was realistic!! i was terrified writing this but it was for a friend so i carried on working through it;; super glad you liked it and thankyou for commenting ♥

loudestoflove August 3 2012, 23:04:24 UTC

BUT HOW ARE YOU SO PERFECT THO.

best birthday present. kai pines so welllllll, i love the little childish touches, how he's so certain that he's the only one suffering, bless his little self-involved heart. i love that he does stupid shit like watch fancams instead of actually trying to talk to yixing, because jongin is a child.

ofc yixing finds jongin trying so hard hilarious, ugh your yixing is perfect. i really like how he's always determined to go slow and looks after jongin so carefully

and the kaisoo bromance <3_____<3 and sehun being a whiny teenager ugh i just want to roll around in this.

THANK YOU BB THIS IS FLAWLESS!!!!

thatdayismine August 5 2012, 00:05:49 UTC

I AM ONLY AS PERFECT AS YOU ARE. SO PRETTY FLAWLESS, I SHOULD THINK.

kai's such a twat, i love him and talking to people? whaaat? kim jongin would never. besides, he sucks at feelings and would rather sulk because obvsly teenager!kai is the true kai. backwards cap and all.

i am the most glad that you liked yixing's characterisation because the entire time i was freaking out that he wasn't coming out right. idk, idk. I AM JUST REALLY HAPPY YOU LIKED IT. IT IS ALL I NEEDED. ♥♥♥

i could not leave the kaisoo bromance out, most truest of otps.

ILY ♥