Three times, Amen.

[thatnobodygrrl]

The wind blows through his hair - still meticulously styled - and it makes the chains on the sides of his pants clink together. They clink against the metal railing he’s sitting on so precariously. He looks so beautiful sitting there on that railing. The railing wrapped around his deck, twelve stories above the busy street.

I wonder what he

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[orangehomicidal]

I are confused about the ending. Not the point. VERY NICELY WRITTEN *awed*.

Russian Roulette = best thing to write about. My personal favorite use of it is a torture device. :)

ANYWAY. Yes. EXQUISITE. :)

I enjoyed. (can y'explain the ending to moi please?)

_OH

[thatnobodygrrl]

XD well I was thinking how Demyx /does/ die, but like... Zexion can't watch because he realizes he's been watching him die for a while now, and I know it wasn't really clear, but it was supposed to be like this is the third/final time he tells Demyx he loves him. >< Hope that makes it a bit clearer...

[orangehomicidal]

naw.. it wasn't that... Its when Zexion goes downstairs and he's got his eyes closed and shit... That's kinda where I lost the narritive. :P

But I still thought it was win.

_OH