In Dark Corners, Pt 1, NC17word_vomityNovember 30 2011, 18:10:39 UTC
(forgive me, I haven't written any smut in awhile)
It's not the first time they've kissed. It's not the first time that too many shots and too little willpower has led to roaming hands over heated skin. He knows what her mouth tastes like and the way his hand fits into the curve of her waist. But this is the first time that Zak isn't around to pull them back from the edge, to remind them of what cannot be. He's on maneuvers and won't be back tonight. He should have told me, Lee thinks angrily as he shoves Kara roughly against the brick of the alley, demanding and rough. If Lee had known that Zak was gone, he wouldn't have showed up at their door unannounced, hoping to surprise Zak and if he could admit it, to see her again. Maybe even more of that second motive than the first. He told himself it was OK though. The wanting to see her because he'd promised himself that he'd never act on it again
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Re: In Dark Corners, Pt 2, NC17word_vomityNovember 30 2011, 18:11:12 UTC
She's pushing back against him, her hips bucking wildly, rutting against him like she can't stand not to. She catches his eyes, tries to pull her hands free. He resists, slams them back. He hears the slight moan she releases with the impact as leans in to capture it with his own mouth. He swallows her need and opens her wider for more. No finesse. Just tongues and teeth fighting for dominance. Eventually he's forced to release her wrists in his desperation to touch the rest of her, but she's having none of it. Her hands shoot out to his belt, tugging wildly, ripping at the closures with trembling fingers, too turned on for dexterity, settling instead on sheer force.
"Lee," She begs him, her voice breaking. His dick jumps at the sound of his name on her lips. "Please."
Right, he thinks switching tactics as his hands push hastily at her pants. But she's got a hand wrapped around him already, squeezing tight. He groans, losing focus for a moment, reveling in the feel of her skin against him, but she doesn't. Her other hand finishes
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Re: In Dark Corners, Pt 2, NC17word_vomityNovember 30 2011, 21:05:22 UTC
(Although I must admit I really want to see that confrontation)
Hmmm. I gotta admit, I do have a pretty good idea of what it looks like in my head. Perhaps tomorrow I'll give it a try. If my brain cooperates. I'm on a med that honestly makes me feel stupidly slow right now. It is QUITE aggravating for writing purposes!
Re: In Dark Corners, Pt 2, NC17onlyarianaDecember 1 2011, 00:49:40 UTC
Ohhh, He really is sorry but he totally meant to do it. And I'm glad he did. If he hadn't would Kara decide to tell Zak? You totally should write that. It'll be awesome. I like how it is Kara who can't hold back in this. Really great story in so so many ways.
It's not the first time they've kissed. It's not the first time that too many shots and too little willpower has led to roaming hands over heated skin. He knows what her mouth tastes like and the way his hand fits into the curve of her waist. But this is the first time that Zak isn't around to pull them back from the edge, to remind them of what cannot be. He's on maneuvers and won't be back tonight. He should have told me, Lee thinks angrily as he shoves Kara roughly against the brick of the alley, demanding and rough. If Lee had known that Zak was gone, he wouldn't have showed up at their door unannounced, hoping to surprise Zak and if he could admit it, to see her again. Maybe even more of that second motive than the first. He told himself it was OK though. The wanting to see her because he'd promised himself that he'd never act on it again ( ... )
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"Lee," She begs him, her voice breaking. His dick jumps at the sound of his name on her lips. "Please."
Right, he thinks switching tactics as his hands push hastily at her pants. But she's got a hand wrapped around him already, squeezing tight. He groans, losing focus for a moment, reveling in the feel of her skin against him, but she doesn't. Her other hand finishes ( ... )
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Self...when the muse won't cooperate...PORN!
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Hmmm. I gotta admit, I do have a pretty good idea of what it looks like in my head. Perhaps tomorrow I'll give it a try. If my brain cooperates. I'm on a med that honestly makes me feel stupidly slow right now. It is QUITE aggravating for writing purposes!
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BTW, this was great
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As for writing the confrontation...not sure yet.
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Very sexy! Everybody likes a little alpha!Lee leaving his mark. ;)
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