Prompt Post 3

Jul 10, 2011 10:08


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FILL: We Made a Graveyard (1/?) anonymous October 23 2011, 17:16:30 UTC
Marcus had always known how this story would end.

A bullet to either of their brains.

He just hadn’t expected Esca to ask for it.

“Shoot me, Marcus. Fuckin’ shoot me, now!”

***They’d never know how it spread so fast, or where it started. Didn’t matter. These were the facts ( ... )

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Re: FILL: We Made a Graveyard (1/?) poziomeczka October 23 2011, 18:35:04 UTC
stupid fucking lj. HOW WAS I NOT NOTIFIED ABOUT THIS?

this is already absolutely incredible, I've held my breath for the whole time.

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Re: FILL: We Made a Graveyard (1/?) originalpuck October 23 2011, 20:38:38 UTC
!!!!!

I love your zombies - how they move, and attack, and scent their prey. The imagery in this is just lovely, too, and oh, the glimpse of the ending of this is utterly heartbreaking! I AM SO IN LOVE WITH THIS ALREADY!

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Re: FILL: We Made a Graveyard (1/?) ladydamondred October 23 2011, 21:34:53 UTC
Zombies! *giggles maniacally*

Very excellent. Waiting eagerly for more.

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Re: FILL: We Made a Graveyard (1/?) ladytiferet October 23 2011, 23:24:26 UTC
It's perfect, it's so perfect, and you set up both of them brilliantly! I hope we'll get more soon :)

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FILL: We Made a Graveyard (2/?) anonymous October 24 2011, 12:22:08 UTC
“I suppose that sets us on even ground,” MacCunoval had said, low and even, once Marcus had curtly relayed the scene which had played out some twenty miles past.

Marcus grinded his teeth and tasted the iron tang of blood on his tongue. He didn’t reply. Marcus hadn’t committed cold-blooded murder. He’d killed through necessity, for survival.

Regardless, Marcus was one bullet down and one bloodied bumper up.

He continued to drive.

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There was no reception in these goddamn hills. No gas stations, no cars, no humanity. The man who sat in the back seat didn’t count for the latter.

After a time of frozen silence, MacCunoval said with unnerving apathy, “End of days.”

Marcus couldn’t deny or confirm. Instead he fiddled with the shitty GPS module, in search of the nearest town. He needed a working phone, the internet, something. He needed information and he needed it now ( ... )

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Re: FILL: We Made a Graveyard (2/?) pouxin October 24 2011, 16:09:13 UTC
Zombies scare me. This story scares me. It is awesome though.

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Re: FILL: We Made a Graveyard (2/?) ladytiferet October 24 2011, 21:50:39 UTC
I didn't realize we were missing a good, gory horror in this fandom until we got this - it's absolutely brilliant!

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Re: FILL: We Made a Graveyard (2/?) nimue_8 October 24 2011, 22:24:39 UTC
I'm hooked!

Captivating, scary and in-character!

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Re: FILL: We Made a Graveyard (2/?) originalpuck October 25 2011, 01:22:14 UTC
asdkjhslkjdaslkj. I keep trying to leave a comment to this, but I just end up left without words every time. Everything. I love EVERYTHING that this is. The wonderful imagery, the sensory details, the tension, Esca's mini-freakout that effects Marcus even though he's trying so hard not to let him get to him, the ghost town, OMG YOU ARE AMAZING!!!!

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FILL: We Made a Graveyard (3/?) anonymous October 25 2011, 08:51:54 UTC
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Run, run, run. Breathe. Run!

Sharp, ragged screams spiked holes into the thick fabric of falling night. Each fractured wail stabbed through Marcus’ resolve like a knife to his lungs, leaving him gasping as he shot down the centre of the street. Countless fumbling footsteps raced behind; clacking bones and torn, squelching muscle.

Blood splatter dried on Marcus’ cheeks and neck, the collar of his uniform soaked and cold and clinging to his skin. His gun nearly slipped from his red-slick fingers as he shifted it from one hand to the other and yanked open the truck door.

“The fuck?” MacCunoval’s stiff face was pressed up to the cell, his fingertips clawed against the metal cage that separated the back from the front.

Marcus spared him the briefest glance - long enough to see the flicker of shock disappear into a cold, hard façade. “Sit down,” he said, the boom of his voice filling the cabin ( ... )

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Re: FILL: We Made a Graveyard (3/?) ladytiferet October 25 2011, 09:07:53 UTC
It gave me shivers, seriously! And their interaction is so engaging :)

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Re: FILL: We Made a Graveyard (3/?) originalpuck October 27 2011, 09:49:16 UTC
I love that you gave us a brief time skip between Marcus entering the building in the town, and this part. It gives us a chance to let our imaginations wander, to really interact with the story in order to explain just WTF happened to Marcus before the story picks back up.

Every time Esca and Marcus converse, or interact at all, I'm grinning like the cheshire cat. OMG it's all written so well, and so true to character, and yet there's an edge to it, a humor and darkness and tension.

So much love for this. So much.

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FILL: We Made a Graveyard (4/?) anonymous November 2 2011, 17:10:39 UTC
The road had tapered. Foreboding hills and deep valleys filled and pooled with darkness, eventually giving way to a thick forest with a thin snake of pavement twisting through.

Marcus followed this single vein, not pausing at any villages for provisions. That could be saved for later, and only when absolutely necessary.

MacCunoval remained mostly silent, and Marcus preferred it that way. He didn’t need the devil on his shoulder, whispering in his ear. Marcus required calm; a place to think - and, Marcus begrudgingly admitted to himself, to sleep.

The road wavered in his vision, and for a few blurry seconds he would imagine that this had all been a nightmare. Then a scream would sound in the distance, or they’d pass a chewed corpse of an elderly woman, and reality would snap back.

In some ways, Marcus wondered if much of the world was changing at all. Marcus’ service in the Marines had taught him about murder and sacrifice and rage. Bravery, cowardice, survival.

The world hadn’t changed that much, had it? There were just a few ( ... )

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Re: FILL: We Made a Graveyard (4/?) ladytiferet November 2 2011, 18:08:58 UTC
God, Esca, so freaking dangerously sexy oO And Marcus is a BAMF too :D

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Re: FILL: We Made a Graveyard (4/?) poziomeczka November 4 2011, 18:10:27 UTC
I LOVE THIS SO SO SO MUCH, MYSTERIOUS ANON ♥
it's an instant classic.

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