hnnnnnnnnnnnnnnng. I read it and I squeaked! And then I read it again and it's brilliant and extremely hot. You've captured a night of slightly drunk clubbing perfectly. I love how they're so intense and into each other and it's just really really hot.
quick fill: Filthy Things 2/?
anonymous
April 2 2011, 14:03:36 UTC
Thanks for the comments, and I'm happy you're liking it so far, OP! Here's another bit.. I hope Esca isn't too out of character, but I figure he is slightly drunk.. ;)Esca's hands move from Marcus's hips, up under his shirt until he's thumbing at the skin there, and Marcus drops a hand to Esca's lower back, pressing Esca even closer, before sliding his fingers down over Esca's ass. He grips him, hand splayed possessively over Esca's ass cheeks as they grind together, and Esca finally opens his eyes to find Marcus still watching him, his own eyes dark and wanting
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quick fill: Filthy Things 3/3
anonymous
April 2 2011, 18:52:14 UTC
(argh.. anon fail. lol) Here's the rest! Hope you enjoy it, OP. And anon, thank you for all the things! :DEsca's fingers tug at Marcus's belt loops, and he pulls the jeans down just low enough to free Marcus's cock. The head is wet, and smeared with pre-come, and Esca pushes his face against it, smelling Marcus and running his cheek along the side, before he trails his tongue back down, teasingly, and dips it into the slit. It tastes salty and it makes Marcus's hips jerk so Esca does it again, the tip of his tongue pressing deep into the slit of Marcus's cock, and again, until he takes Marcus into his mouth and sucks gently at the head of his cock until Marcus is letting out soft little sighs of pleasure
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Already hot as hell and we're only as far as the kissing !
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I LOVE ESCA'S DRUNK TALK.
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THIS WAS INSANELY HOT! MY BRAIN. IT HAS MELTED. GUH.
(and the ending was so cute!)
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:3 you are a quick and dirty author. I like this.
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