Re: Fill 'Blue for you' Part 2bpoziomeczkaApril 25 2011, 14:51:41 UTC
author anon! had i had half of your skill i would be announcing it to all the world constantly WHICH PROBABLY IS THE REASON WHY I DON'T HAVE IT.
I love your writing, I love it. It flows smoothly and it really reminds me of Sutcliff's elegant yet plain style. VERY VERY BEAUTIFUL ALSO I KNOW THAT IMMENSE HOTNESS IS YET TO COME AND I AWAIT IT PATIENTLY. NOT AT ALL BITING MY HANDS.
Fill 'Blue for you' Part 3
anonymous
April 25 2011, 21:29:34 UTC
Esca runs his hands over as much of the skin on his upper back and shoulders as he can reach and is pleased when although still sensitive there is no pain. Good enough that today can be the day. He will have to remember to leave an offering for the local goddess at the nearby spring in thanks for such swift healing, but for now he needs to find Marcus. Easier said than done when the Roman has been going out of his way to avoid Esca since the unfortunate incident several nights ago
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Re: Fill 'Blue for you' Part 3
anonymous
April 27 2011, 18:52:58 UTC
Esca tried all Marcus' usual haunts and had resorted to asking the slaves when he saw his former master heading towards him. Marcus evidently hadn't seen him for as soon as he did he changed direction and headed towards the bathhouse instead. Muttering under his breath, Esca squared his shoulders and set off in pursuit, ignoring the slaves who didn't bother trying to hide their amusement
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Fill 'Blue for you' Part 5
anonymous
April 27 2011, 20:46:39 UTC
Oops! Clearly that last part should have been labelled 'Part 4' but I am forgetful. Sorry.Marcus sinks into the pleasantly warm water until it laps just below his shoulders and waits for Esca to join him, sighing in relief and letting his tense muscles relax. Although he hadn't initially been planning on bathing it now seems like a wonderful idea; he'd had no idea just how apprehensive he was about talking to Esca since he'd made a fool of himself the other night. When he'd woken the next morning he had groaned and cursed himself up and down for overreacting like an outraged maiden. Concerned about the way all sense seemed to abandon him around his former slave, Marcus had decided to try and keep his distance for a few days to calm his nerves. Instead it had entirely the opposite effect. But, he should have known that Esca would force the matter into the open and now the air is cleared
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Fill 'Blue for you' Part 6a
anonymous
April 30 2011, 23:37:40 UTC
Sorry for the delay in posting this and once again thank you for all the lovely comments, they encourage me to keep going when RL conspires against me.When he surfaces from the pool with his back to Marcus, Esca has his eyes tightly closed and he grips the edge of the pool with a grip so hard he thinks the tesserae might well come away in his hands. From behind he hears a startled gasp...and then nothing
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Fill 'Blue for you' Part 6b
anonymous
April 30 2011, 23:57:00 UTC
When Marcus finally pulls back gasping for air, Esca can feel the throb of his cock where it now presses against his stomach, pulsing with the blood which is surging through it with every beat of his heart. Marcus' hands have crept back to Esca's tattoo during the kiss but now they slide lower to grasp his arse and raise Esca against the wall until they are perfectly aligned. At the first rub of their cocks over one another it is Esca's turn to growl. He wraps his legs around Marcus and leans up to sink his teeth into his neck and drive his nails into his back in a primitive urge that is purely take and mark. Marcus lets out an unbelievably erotic noise, half moan, half whimper, his face almost wild with the need for this and Esca knows that neither of them will last long. His hand moves to wrap around their cocks only to find that Marcus' hand is also there and together they grasp and pull, hips driving against one another, working together to drive themselves towards climax
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I love your writing, I love it. It flows smoothly and it really reminds me of Sutcliff's elegant yet plain style. VERY VERY BEAUTIFUL ALSO I KNOW THAT IMMENSE HOTNESS IS YET TO COME AND I AWAIT IT PATIENTLY. NOT AT ALL BITING MY HANDS.
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