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the_tenzo

PROMPTED COMMENTFIC PORN MEME THING

Jul 28, 2009 14:26

Ohnoez, she's having one of her hair-brained ideas again!

So, in brief, here is the story: I just found today (at work, no less!) a free-for-the-taking vintage edition of The Joy of Sex. There is no end to how amused I am by this. And, honest-to-goodness my first thought was, "How can I use this for ficcing purposes?"

Well, the answer is right here.

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genre: smut, !commentfic meme

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Supreme Human Experience, Part 1 unfolded73 July 28 2009, 23:29:46 UTC

Things didn't turn out the way she'd imagined it.

The journey from Bad Wolf Bay to Bergen to London to home was long and monotonous, and the Doctor, suffering from his own sort of regeneration sickness ("He's like a newborn baby, Rose," Jackie had said, "and newborns sleep"), had dozed for most of the trip. Rose was left beside him, her sweaty hand clasped in his or tucked through his arm, with nothing to do but imagine the way their lives might unfold. Every feeling coursed through her, from elation to rage to grief and sadness, and as the emotions swamped her, different scenarios presented themselves. He wasn't the Doctor, she thought wildly, he was a thing, and who was the Doctor to tell her to look after him like he was an abandoned puppy? Of course he was the Doctor, she thought a bit later, studying his face in sleep, and her heart clenched with love for him. She would take him home and undress him and make love to him, because it's what she had wanted for all of that time apart. He was damaged, he was genocidal and ( ... )

Re: Supreme Human Experience, Part 2 plaid_slytherin July 29 2009, 04:25:51 UTC

This was wonderful. I always love seeing Rose's thoughts about how Ten II differs from the regular Doctor and you handled it nicely here. And it might be mean, but I do love him hitting his head. :D

Re: Supreme Human Experience, Part 2 unfolded73 July 29 2009, 16:34:37 UTC

Thank you! I love excuses to go back and reapproach the Ten II/Rose relationship from the beginning and from a different angle, so this was fun.

Re: Supreme Human Experience, Part 2 editrx July 29 2009, 07:33:48 UTC

Loved this; his humanity in hitting his head really was a great coda.

Re: Supreme Human Experience, Part 2 unfolded73 July 29 2009, 16:36:23 UTC

Thank you! The head-banging was the seed idea of this fic.

Re: Supreme Human Experience, Part 2 lorelaisquared July 29 2009, 08:43:39 UTC

The thing that Rose never considered, not even for a moment, in all of the scenarios that she had considered, was that they would be abducted by aliens before they could even have a proper meal. BWAH I was reading along and this came up so unexpectedly that I must have laughed for a whole minute. Awesome ploy to get them alone!

with his hybrid DNA and pockets full of alien tech ("I keep a lot of things in the pockets of this suit, same as the other one," he explained, and she wondered how he'd kept track of what was in which suit,) LOL I love this. And what a great question. What will happen when the other Doctor needs something that was in the Blue suit? This brings up all kinds of questions (and possibilities)! LOL

Awwwww the first time in this body. First time of the rest of our lives together. Should be special." *swoons* romantic doctor is meltworthy and then some. *sigh*

HAHAHAHHAHAHA "It would seem that sex can be a bit hazardous," Perfect and hilarious use of the prompt! Hazardous indeed. Poor Doctor ( ... )

Re: Supreme Human Experience, Part 2 unfolded73 July 29 2009, 16:39:06 UTC

So many fics, including my own, have Rose and Ten II's first time as a perfectly romantic encounter, so I thought it would be fun to write it very differently. So glad you enjoyed it!

Re: Supreme Human Experience, Part 2 lorelaisquared July 29 2009, 17:46:16 UTC

It's great to see a different perspective. It adds more depth I think. Plus you did it so superbly!~ :)

Re: Supreme Human Experience, Part 2 catyuy July 29 2009, 10:22:59 UTC

Perfect way for this to happen for them.

Re: Supreme Human Experience, Part 2 unfolded73 July 29 2009, 16:40:20 UTC

Aw, thank you!

Re: Supreme Human Experience, Part 2 wildwinterwitch July 29 2009, 13:18:23 UTC

The shadow of a crease in the flesh next to his hipbone and the smattering of hair leading down from his navel were mesmerising.

Now, where might that have come from!? ;)

Lovely and funny and surprising.

Re: Supreme Human Experience, Part 2 unfolded73 July 29 2009, 16:44:06 UTC

I have no idea what you're talking about. ;)
*drops a pile of ComicCon pictures on the floor*
Hrm, how did those get there?

Re: Supreme Human Experience, Part 2 hazelwho July 29 2009, 21:41:55 UTC

Ow. Guh. And, tee-hee. Loved this!

Re: Supreme Human Experience, Part 2 rowofstars July 30 2009, 18:43:51 UTC

Then he finally awoke and stood and stretched his arms above his head, revealing a strip of flesh above the waistband of his trousers.

*thud*

I really could have died from just remembering those pictures.

Re: Supreme Human Experience, Part 2 doctorsdiva July 30 2009, 21:52:48 UTC

Oh yes that was exactly the images that my mind bought up too. GUH bless comic-con and all who took pic there.

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