[fic] Last Request - Part 15 (ACook/Tiemann, Cook/Archuleta)

[the3sunrises]

Title: Last Request - Part 15/16
Rating: NC-17 (language, explicit sex)
Pairing: Andrew Cook/Neal Tiemann, David Archuleta/David Cook (American Idol Season 7)
Summary: Neal's actually pretty sure he noticed that right off, the things Andrew and David have in common.
Word Count: 5197
Disclaimer: This story is fictional, and only barely loosely based

Comments

[otherbella]

cannot even breathe.

oh my hell.

cannot. even. breathe.

THIS WAS A ROLLERCOASTER OF EMOTION.

I don't even know WHERE it can go from here. (but I can't wait to find out.)

Thank you thank you thank you a million times. LOVE. IT.

[silsbee329]

Okay, here's the thing: You are one of those rare writers who I have total confidence in to deliver. Every time. I can just go with the story and lose myself. It is SUCH a pleasure to read your work.

And this chapter is amazing. You almost made me cry -- a few times I think! I want them both to be happy. They deserve it. LOVE.

[jehane_writes]

Finally, OMG. *cheers forever*

[asweetdownfall]

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THIS IS SPECTACULAR IN SO MANY WAYS. aldslfasdlgj It was the perfect mix of sweet, hot and angst. adslgjaslgfmjg And Andrew's song at the end? WAY TO BREAK MY SOUL, LEICI. AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.

laeedmfnlsgjsld I can't believe there is one more part. :( :(