[FANFIC] when i gave you my umbrella on that rainy day

[the8thstone]

Title: when i gave you my umbrella on that rainy day
Prompt Used: 5. Umbrella (AU)
Medium: Fanfic
Rating: T
Warning: Swearing.
Comment: Two-shot. High School AU.
Er, not really sure about the quality of this story. Features loner!Sakura. Hopefully it came out alright...

-Part One-

Comments

[rosaxx50]

She didn’t have a tragic past. She wasn’t the rough-diamond kind of beauty-after all, what was pink hair good for? She would like to think that she had a strong, independent personality, but how strong could it be if she couldn’t even speak out against those bullies (read: Sasuke fan-girls) at her school?

I like your Sakura, and your way of examining her. Your writing conveys her attitude with every word, and has brilliant imagery.

Also, lollollol Sakura and Sasuke, fighting before class. And I'm hoping Sakura gets revenge for being called a freak.

No mistakes that I saw so far :)

[the8thstone]

Thanks! When this story was written, I wanted Sakura to doubt herself (and to sort of imitate an image of a loner).

Well, if she becomes Sasuke's girlfriend, what better revenge will there be? ;)

Thanks for reading. :)

[the8thstone]

If you are still interested in reading, Part two is up here: http://the8thstone.livejournal.com/13845.html

[the8thstone]

Sure, I'll read your story. :)
If you want to read part two to this fic, it's up here: http://the8thstone.livejournal.com/13845.html.
:)