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the_7th_swan

Fic: The Swan Prince -Chapter Five

Mar 15, 2011 21:27

Title: The Swan Prince

Pairing: Tony DiNozzo/Jethro Gibbs

Rating: NC-17

Warnings: Supernatural themes, sorcery, angst and general Tony!Whump. I don't go easy on him this story. Also? Very AU. Like, out-of-this-world AU. Though I do slip in enough references to amuse. Try to find them all. ^^

Spoilers: None whatsoever... unless you've watched 'The Swan ( Read more... )

bdsm, nc-17, ncis, supernatural, fic: the swan prince, gibbs/tony

Comments 21

ferneberga March 15 2011, 11:01:39 UTC

Loved it!! Well worth the wait. Looking forward to the next update

the_7th_swan March 16 2011, 11:08:13 UTC

Glad it was worth the wait. Next part up very soon. Like, really, really soon. :)

megamom2 March 15 2011, 11:04:30 UTC

the_7th_swan March 16 2011, 11:09:29 UTC

Yay for a good chapter length. I always struggle over where I should cut it and since I always divide into chapters once it's written, it was very difficult.

Thanks for reviewing. <3

starbuckssue March 15 2011, 14:13:14 UTC

I so love this story, I love the way that Gibbs has taken Tony on but I'm sure he's realised there's more to the story than Tony's letting on, I don't think he believes the anaemia story! Maybe he'll wangle it so with bad weather they have to stay out past midnight and he'll see what happens. Tony really needs someone to love and protect him!

the_7th_swan March 16 2011, 11:11:13 UTC

I have to give you a cookie for this comment but I can't tell you why. In fact, consider the delicious chocolately goodness a thorough distraction. ^^

Seriously, Gibbs'... ideas... on what's wrong with Tony will be explored soon, with some interesting results. ;)

finlaure March 15 2011, 14:27:27 UTC

Yes I caught all of the little quips from the cannon. It makes this all the more enjoyable to read. I just Love it.

the_7th_swan March 16 2011, 11:11:55 UTC

lol! And I hid them so sneakily too!! Lol!

Glad your enjoying the fic -subtext and all.

kathana_grey March 15 2011, 15:05:38 UTC

We-who-know-Gibbs can guess that Tony's excuses about anaemia, no matter how much Gibbs might be drawn to the young man, aren't floating. Poor swan boy has no idea yet ^^

I love the slow build up and the detailed universe you are creating, with all the small details and canon cameos.

the_7th_swan March 16 2011, 11:13:30 UTC

Thank goodness. I was a little worried people would think it was progressing too slowly so that your enjoying the pace is very reassuring.

Thanks for leaving a comment and fyi, totally loved your 'Heat' fic. ^^