Two more poems, brewed inside my mind

[ieatmousse]

Not gonna write here except to say that I wrote these on tuesday after school and none of you will understand the first one so just try and enjoy it (if you understand it then you know more about me than I realised anyone did). Either that or I'm becoming transparent and will have to put more half-truths out about me

Comments

[god_part_ii]

Excel-hyente.

And as for the I. pentameter, I can't even write it, unless I've been perusing Shakespeare for the last 3 hours. And then it's still worse than that.

[ieatmousse]

It's easy. Just sit down and write about 60 lines of it with no rhyming structure or topic. Just a leetle practice with the beat.

[adyingatheist]

cute!!!! the second one definitely my fav of the two, very tongue-in-cheek, i like!

[ieatmousse]

I like the idea of the poem describing itself. Tis mightily fun.