LJ cut fail (or it was one) and also evil Tuesdays

[the_aftershock]

Sorry about how sad this is, the beginning of the story is supposed to be really crap. 'Cause you get to see how much better it gets as time goes on, don'tchaknow?

Those of you who love me and are handy will help me out, give me suggestions on this and that, let me know what you like and dislike and give me some ideas as to what small plot points I

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[the_disco_fairy]

)8 Aww! I don't think he seems flat- it's the introduction! We're getting to know him!

Also, I want to kick Leon in the face. With a whale.

[the_aftershock]

How do you do that?

Do you tie it to your foot?

[the_disco_fairy]

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[I hate you so much.]