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In Which There is Overwhelming Sadness (Fic: Impatience)

Feb 10, 2011 21:39

Title: Impatience
Characters/Pairings: Implied Spain/Prussia, mentions of France, Germany, and Russia.
Rating: Teen? I'm not sure...
Summary: All he wants is to love him, but his guilt over the past won't let him.
Author's Note: This is actually based on the Impatience comics that one of the comms I belong to translates and takes place more from Spain' ( Read more... )

sadness!, hetalia, prussia, spain

Comments 10

infinityandaday February 11 2011, 05:58:37 UTC

I love this pairing but jsdfsdfsd so sad ;A;

the_almighty_ro February 11 2011, 18:53:51 UTC

http://community.livejournal.com/six_string_scan/

That's where I got the idea originally! I swear, the story behind that series of comics is so sad that I feel as if my heartstings have litterally been yanked out. Hopefully the artist they translate the comics for will put another out soon!

And thanks so much for reading! <3

infinityandaday February 14 2011, 11:17:40 UTC

Thank you very much!
I just read through the impatience series, so cute and sad ; 3;

the_almighty_ro February 19 2011, 19:44:40 UTC

I know, right?! D: I just had to write this after the latest update and was all, "WHHHHHHHHHY?!" throughout the entire ordeal. Hopefully there will be more comics so I can write a happy sequel!

Gasp! franklymydear89 February 11 2011, 08:09:02 UTC

That was so far out of my normal view of Prussia, I think it made it even sadder! Poor Spain...

And I feel your pain, liking odd pairings. It turns out Ian is opposed to anything outside cannon, so I get zero sympathy when I fangirl over my various OTPs. Sadnesses on all fronts.

Re: Gasp! the_almighty_ro February 11 2011, 18:57:24 UTC

Hee hee, I'm so glad that I can still surprise you with characterization! But yes, poor Spain...pray with me that there is a happy ending?

Ian will come to the dark side one day...just you watch! Canon will make just as angry as it makes us and he will be all, "That person deserves so much better than that person!" And when he realizes that he has just had this monumental thought...his head will explode. u-u

Re: Gasp! franklymydear89 February 13 2011, 17:07:40 UTC

Hehe, I like my husband with his head on his shoulders, thanks.

A happy ending does look unlikely, even if I'd like it. You'd have a lot of work ahead of you with that one.

Re: Gasp! the_almighty_ro February 13 2011, 19:52:08 UTC

Indeed. But this is based on a series of comics, so if there is a happy ending in it's future...I may write a sequel to this. Let's holdout for it.

esonador April 15 2011, 12:27:18 UTC

Waaauuuu...
Sad,yes,but perfect.I love how melancholy and sadness are so real there, I can almost feel them pouring into me...I don't know how to express myself better:D
It left deep impression within my soul. You can write so great story - keep writing! (preferable still Spain and Prussia :D)

the_almighty_ro April 19 2011, 20:51:25 UTC

Thank you so much for your kind words! I'm always happy to know that my writing had some kind of effect on person, especially if it went as deep as you said it did (my one goal when I write is to make the reader FEEL).

And don't worry, you expressed yourself just fine; it's comments like your's that always bring a smile to my face.