Comments | the_altverse: Fic: The Broken Key (3/4)

shinyopals in the_altverse

Fic: The Broken Key (3/4)

Jan 09, 2011 15:30

Title: The Broken Key (3/4)
Author: shinyopals
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Rose/Ten II
Summary: Trapped and imprisoned, with no hope of rescue from Torchwood, the Doctor and Rose are forced to go to desperate lengths to save each other and the universe from a deadly enemy who's been watching them for a long time.
Author's notes: Thanks to ginamak for beta reading and ( Read more... )

present day earth setting, series 1

Comments 19

firstofoct January 9 2011, 20:49:17 UTC

Oh you tease! Such an exciting chapter, but WHY DID YOU LEAVE IT THERE!? :(

Loved the Master's reaction to the fact that the Doctor is part human!

shinyopals January 9 2011, 21:04:14 UTC

:D IT'S A GREAT PLACE TO LEAVE IT.

I actually contemplated leaving it like, a line later, but in the end decided this was more fun.

And the Master discovering that is SO MUCH FUN. XD

Ty, m'dear! :D

professor_spork January 9 2011, 20:49:17 UTC

This story is so unbelievably excellent.

shinyopals January 9 2011, 21:04:51 UTC

Thank you! :D

(The comment has been removed)

shinyopals January 9 2011, 21:15:17 UTC

Lol IKR? I was looking for a place that divided the remaining bit roughly equally and this was just TOO PERFECT.

elirrina January 9 2011, 21:28:46 UTC

Hahaha! And LOL, Jack.

shinyopals January 9 2011, 21:34:09 UTC

:D

Poor Jack. XD

superfrogqueen8 January 9 2011, 22:20:34 UTC

Oh man, I love the way you write the Master. He is so delightfully evil with just a bit of crazy. :D

But seriously, you are an evil, evil person for ending the story there. :P

shinyopals January 9 2011, 23:13:27 UTC

Thank you! :D

I love writing the Master. He is possibly my favourite character to write.