SomeGuy889: i think SomeGuy889: that sometimes the rhythm works fantastically, but sometimes it falls dead real bad-like. the whole everything of the poem is grrrrreat but i think the ending comes toooo quickly and toooo bluntly. A Cynical Grrrl: thats a very good criticism SomeGuy889: well SomeGuy889: that was a very good poem that should be worked on
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SomeGuy889: that sometimes the rhythm works fantastically, but sometimes it falls dead real bad-like. the whole everything of the poem is grrrrreat but i think the ending comes toooo quickly and toooo bluntly.
A Cynical Grrrl: thats a very good criticism
SomeGuy889: well
SomeGuy889: that was a very good poem that should be worked on
^ that was helpful, I intend on working on it.
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ps> the villlage comes out in 4 days
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i love it.
especially all the colours.
hah i sound so british when i spell colours like this.
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ps. you ARE british.
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