Comments | the_blackorder: I Can Make You Feel Good

the_blackorder

I Can Make You Feel Good

Jul 06, 2011 03:26

Title: I Can Make You Feel Good
Pairing: Dooseob
Rating: NC-17
Genre: Romance, Smut, PWP
Word Count: 2,836
Summary: Yoseob has a dentist boyfriend, and his name is Yoon Doojoon.
Disclaimer: I don't own the boys physically, but it's in my mind. (8
A/N: I wrote this a long time ago, when the song Dr. Feel Good by Rania just came out. Dearest carnival_pinup helped me to ( Read more... )

#pairing: dooseob, #rating: nc-17, #band: beast, #fanfiction

Comments 13

carnival_pinup July 5 2011, 20:55:59 UTC

/emerges from life to claim my spot >D

the_blackorder July 6 2011, 18:00:41 UTC

hi noona 8'D you've read it before already! /smacks you away

noodlesyummy July 5 2011, 21:15:59 UTC

I like it *o* SO HOT!!! Nice idea *O*

the_blackorder July 6 2011, 18:01:03 UTC

i dont even know where it came from though. 8'D

thanks for reading/commenting! <3

locket_street July 5 2011, 21:57:00 UTC

oh god - I just finished reading this and I have to leave for school. damn it - it's not much, but I'll be back to give a proper comment~ oh yeah
this is just too hot omg - guess I won't be falling asleep in school anytime soon~

the_blackorder July 6 2011, 18:01:42 UTC

have a nice day in school!!! (although i think you're already back by the time you're reading this >.<)

thanks for reading and commenting! <3

ani_ami July 6 2011, 16:30:25 UTC

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the_blackorder July 6 2011, 18:03:38 UTC

I have a thing for slutty ukes HEHEHE. 8'D okay you did not just see me say that. LOL. I hope the flow of the story is alright cuz it's my first time writing such... erm... INTENSE stuff. LOL. So I'm abit worried ^^"

ani_ami July 7 2011, 15:01:32 UTC

You've done a really good job ^^

the_blackorder July 7 2011, 15:09:44 UTC

thank you ;___; im so touched ;___; really thank you for reading and commenting!!! ^^

fairybubbly July 9 2011, 08:45:56 UTC

sorry for the super late comment. i have been meaning to comment like ages ago but just got the chance now. Okay this was beyond HOT. it's like uummffff sextastic HOT and i love the flirtatious conversations in between because it was so awesoom! Can't wait for another dooseob fic from you :)

the_blackorder July 9 2011, 19:11:12 UTC

No comment is too late my dear. Thanks for reading/commenting!!! <3

OMG thank you so much for your kind comments im crying ;___; dooseon celebrating their marriedness lately might inspire me to write soon! I hope I get the vibes to write soon 8'D but writing smut burns my brain HAHAHA