Never a Bride-20 Part I /27

[the_bluesuede]

Author: BlueSuede
Title:  Never a Bride
Rating:  NC17
Genre: Romance/Humor
Pairings/Characters: primarily Chloe/Oliver
Summary:  When a newspaper prints a false engagement announcement for Oliver Queen and Chloe Sullivan, and all their friends are thrilled, Chloe and Oliver decide to stage a fake engagement and breakup to prove to their friends how

Comments

[tadashee]

I loved this! the first part was hot.i love oliver picking and choosing based on chloe's mood.
the scene in her bedroom was probably my favorite part of this story so far. i love how you incorporated the alien/super hero stuff. it is really nice to see chloe and oliver with parents.

i was worried about lucy coming and possibly trying to sabotage(idk why i thought that) but all of the relatives are really entertaining! i'm excited to see how dinner goes!

[chlollifan84]

Amazing update!!
I love how this relationship is building up. They're slowly becoming closer as friends and as lovers.
I also love the reference to the alien/superhero world.
I can't wait to read the second part. This story is definitely one of my favourite ones!

[purple_moon123]

I love that Oliver is able to pick up when Chloe is not comfortable with something.

Meeting family is always such fun. Poor Chloe and her dad sharing something that was very personal to her and not realizing it. But do love how that caused for them to share about their dreams when they were younger.

Can't wait for more

[scout09]

This chapter was so worth the wait! The scene where Oliver's testing the waters of her interest so as not to spook her was so in character - his tendency to strategize everything as well as his ability to read her was spot on. Not only was the sex scene incredibly well written, it advanced the story, and I admire that. He couldn't remember a want ever feeling quite like this, quite like her. - beautiful. I loved that you told this section mainly from Oliver's point of view. eyes met…and he could see panic growing inside of hers. While Chloe's made loads of progress to get to this level of comfort, she's still a little closed off and I liked that you chose to show that through Oliver's eyes.

The trip home for Thanksgiving was priceless and I was as amused as Oliver. Chloe's embarrassment as she recounted the many, many reasons why she had left home was gold. But I loved their bonding over childhood dreams and well-intentioned but misguided parents.

Thank you for another fabulous update. I cannot wait for part 2! :D

[tadashee]

Also, I am now really curious about Christmas with the Queens! I hope we get to see that too!