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the_bluesuede

Never a Bride-20 Part II /27

Feb 15, 2014 14:01

Author: BlueSuede
Title: Never a Bride
Rating: NC17
Genre: Romance/Humor
Pairings/Characters: primarily Chloe/Oliver
Summary: When a newspaper prints a false engagement announcement for Oliver Queen and Chloe Sullivan, and all their friends are thrilled, Chloe and Oliver decide to stage a fake engagement and breakup to prove to their friends how ( Read more... )

multichapter, smallville, anfiction, fic: never a bride, pair: chlollie

Comments 14

purple_moon123 February 16 2014, 06:16:49 UTC

Love the family dinner and what everyone said they were thankful for.

Holy mother of batman!!! That was freaking hot!!! WOW!!!!!!

faby87 February 16 2014, 09:08:24 UTC

I really liked this chapter, comparing the first and the second part is evident how things are changing between them, for the first time is Chloe who starts something between them and she is much more open and relaxed with him and the sex was much more intimate.
I can't wait for the next month, I'm so impatient.
Thank you so much :)

hednin February 16 2014, 19:22:48 UTC

Great chapter, and the last part is... wow,... just...
Wow...

scout09 February 16 2014, 21:00:27 UTC

I remember an interview in which someone, I think it might have been Justin, said that Oliver brought out a fire in Chloe. While I think he had a good point, I would amend that comment a bit. Chloe as a character had a great deal of fire in the early days - it's one of the many things I loved about her. What Oliver did for her more specifically was to help develop that spark into sexual confidence. In this story, you've translated that beautifully. In the beginning chapters, Chloe is high-spirited, but understandably sexually reserved, knowing her history. Oliver has done a wonderful job of bringing her out of her shell in that respect by making her feel comfortable and desired, which in my opinion is exactly what happened on the show. Nicely done ( ... )

the_bluesuede February 16 2014, 21:25:56 UTC

Thank you so much for this review! I'm still smiling from this. Like, wow. As much as I am enjoying the "wow so hot"s because those are a lot of fun, this is better still. I actually really want the sex scenes to help further the plot in this story, and it was so incredible to read that that was hitting home for you. Thank you, thank you for sharing your thoughts, this made more than just my day, it made my whole week.

chlollifan84 February 16 2014, 21:08:54 UTC

Omg, that was insanely hot!!! And I love how they fall asleep, still intertwined. It's so cute and so coupley. Things are definitely changing between them.
Thanks a lot for this great chapter!