Never A Bride-21/27

[the_bluesuede]

Author: BlueSuede
Title:  Never a Bride
Rating:  NC17
Genre: Romance/Humor
Pairings/Characters: primarily Chloe/Oliver
Summary:  When a newspaper prints a false engagement announcement for Oliver Queen and Chloe Sullivan, and all their friends are thrilled, Chloe and Oliver decide to stage a fake engagement and breakup to prove to their friends how

Comments

[tadashee]

aww. that was a very eventful chapter. i loved the plane dirty talk...i blushed a little. and i feel chloe's pain, thats how i feel about my friends. at least she has oliver....

i can't wait until they confess!!

[artgirltx]

I really like the way you write Robert and Laura Queen, both here and in An Origin Story.

The smutty texting on the plane made me laugh, mainly because Ollie was being so obnoxious about it and driving Chloe insane. Well-adjusted Oliver is fun because he's still arrogant, cocky and incorrigible but in a more light-hearted way, without the anger and self-hatred behind it.

I like that Chloe's chat with Diana made her realize that there was someone else who had had the same self-doubt about relationships. And the Oliver/Bruce/Clark exchange was really amusing, especially Bruce's spot-on analysis of Chloe and Oliver.

And, oh, I have so felt that way at weddings, like I was the cheese that stands alone. Nice for Oliver to see those negative thoughts crossing her face and making an effort to reassure her, without getting mad at her for thinking that way.

A month seems such a long time to wait for the next installment, but you always make it worth it.

[malugargula]

They're so amazing together
I loved jealous Ollie ;)
Thanks for sharing

[chlollifan84]

Every time I read you I have that big smile on my face.
I loved the dirty plane talk, I loved jealous Ollie, I loved seeing Diana and Bruce talking about Chloe and Ollie relationship, I loved Laura... I loved everything!
Perfect chapter. I will count the days until the 15th of April. Can't wait to read you again.

[meetin4]

You made it! It's wonderful and Thank you so much for trying so hard to making this chapter up in time.
Oliver is head over heals in love with Chloe and he’s accepted, love it! I love cocky Oliver and jealous Oliver too! Poor weeping Chloe, it’s something you happy for them but feeling like you lost them at the same time. That’s a thing only single people could understand, I suppose or may be not! :-)
Love and enjoy the Chapter. Thank you so much for the update.