Never A Bride-22/2(7)

Apr 16, 2014 22:30



Author: BlueSuede
Title:  Never a Bride
Rating:  NC17
Genre: Romance/Humor
Pairings/Characters: primarily Chloe/Oliver
Summary:  When a newspaper prints a false engagement announcement for Oliver Queen and Chloe Sullivan, and all their friends are thrilled, Chloe and Oliver decide to stage a fake engagement and breakup to prove to their friends how ( Read more... )

multichapter, smallville, fic: never a bride, fanfiction, pair: chlollie

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chlollifan84 April 17 2014, 11:32:12 UTC
Wow, that was so intense! How do you manage to do that? I think at one moment, I nearly forgot to breathe.
This is so beautiful, so well-written, totally worth the wait. Thanks a lot for this amazing chapter.

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scout09 April 17 2014, 17:04:09 UTC
How sad is it that I kept getting excited last weekend because I kept remembering a new chapter would be up this week? I knew this moment would come for the both of them, I just didn't think it would be so soon and yet, I think it was realistically the perfect time for it to happen. It's so in character for Oliver to identify his emotions as love first and for Chloe to enter shut-down mode when things start to get too comfortable and real.

Oliver's moment or realization was so powerful - being horrified he may have done something to hurt her, and panicking that the end was something he most certainly did not want. Chloe, when did I fall in love with you? Ugh, my heart. :( I love that he couldn't wait to kiss her the moment he knew ( ... )

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hellzz_on_earth April 17 2014, 18:31:14 UTC
I really love how you write the intimacy between Chlollie so amazingly beautiful. It isn't just about sex and you bring that to the scene perfectly.
Oh I can't wait to read them fight for this unexpected surprise of falling in love for real!!!
Thanks for the update.
Happy writing.

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kawfjw April 17 2014, 21:22:14 UTC
That was a perfect chapter, hot, intense, sweet and humerous! The only critic I have is that I have to wait a month for the next one!

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abarbiestory April 18 2014, 03:43:44 UTC
That was so intense!!! I'm sitting on the edge of my seat waiting for the new chapter. Great job!!

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