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Never a Bride-23/2(7)

May 15, 2014 22:01

Author: BlueSuede
Title: Never a Bride
Rating: NC17
Genre: Romance/Humor
Pairings/Characters: primarily Chloe/Oliver
Summary: When a newspaper prints a false engagement announcement for Oliver Queen and Chloe Sullivan, and all their friends are thrilled, Chloe and Oliver decide to stage a fake engagement and breakup to prove to their friends how ( Read more... )

multichapter, smallville, fic: never a bride, fanfiction, pair: chlollie

Comments 7

serenitysea May 16 2014, 03:06:07 UTC

AUGH. this is like ripping my own heart out and watching it get pulverized.

I love these two but they need to wake up and get a clue, stat. I don't know who is breaking my heart more right now. JEEZ.

scout09 May 16 2014, 16:47:43 UTC

I've mentioned this to other writers, but usually when I read fics I read them once through for enjoyment and then again when I'm ready to comment so I can organize my thoughts. I couldn't do it today. I was so gutted yesterday and honestly,it stuck with me enough that I don't think I'll need a second read through yet ( ... )

tadashee May 18 2014, 20:25:04 UTC

aww. heartbreaking. i wonder how ollie is holding up. i am glad he told someone the truth. i feel bad for chloe, and i get her confusion but she needs to realize her feelings. i am curious as to where you will take it next!

elenorlaura May 19 2014, 01:14:04 UTC

What a lovely (albeit painful!) chapter you've crafted. The conflict has been percolating nicely in the background for several chapters, so as soon as the perfect wedding dress arrived, I felt like I was right there in the room watching as Chloe was confronted by just how out of control her fake engagement had become. Oliver was there at the right time, but his fears about not being able to break through were realized.

Love, love, love the end of the chapter!

jessicakadie May 29 2014, 06:54:46 UTC

Dammit, I knew it was coming and it still broke my heart. I feel like this story has gone on forever, and I definitely don't mean that in a bad way, its just weird that its nearing its end. Really want to get to the happy Chlollie ending though, and I absolutely love the way you write them. You've gotten me pretty attached to this version of Chlollie, literally can't wait for the next update! :)