IT FELT LIKE FOREVER-COMPL -1,155 words

[the_borderline]

I can't pretend like I can sit here and look at myself straightly in the mirror without wondering about the "could have been" that everyone experiences in the lifetime. Sometimes when the pieces go together in my head now, at a point where it shouldn't bug me, pieces are missing. There are areas that seem unclear, just not there, as if the only way

Comments

[idripmelting]

i think you'll win. is it a winning thing? what do you win? when will you know if you won or not? :P

[the_borderline]

300$

[idripmelting]

yeah do it. win. and phone me to tell me all about it :p

[the_borderline]

Sure, why not!

[radartybalt]

I like it. It has real feeling. Takes me right back to similar experiences of my own.

[the_borderline]

Thanks. It feels weird to read over again.

[tahs]

I think it takes incredible talent to write something like this without dipping into overt sappiness or sentimentality.

I think that this is, basically, absolutely brilliantly done... there's an "accidental" feeling to it... but there's a level of honesty to it that you don't quite see in many essays of this sort...

Honestly, like the first person who commented, you should win. I can't see how anything could top this.

[the_borderline]

Some people might just, pull something out of their asses.

[downer]

Amazing. I loved reading it... the feeling there is great. You get a gold star! ;)

[the_borderline]

Nice. Are you busy saturday?

[downer]

Yeah.. I have to work today then I'm going out with some friends for the night. I know you're having a party tonight, I'm pretty sure I'll be out for most of the night... sorry I won't be able to make it...

But I hope you have a wicked time and that your party goes well. ;) Have fun!