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[the_boy]

i am just as likely to petition for “subtlety,
that delicate and forgotten art” as i am to beg
for the blunt end of a biting,
hastily thrown together string of expletives
your lips were both, though your intentions were neither
so i stopped looking through your
eyes, and looked into them instead
and i believe i'd rather have my soft focus

Comments

[caughthalo]

I like that last phrase, 'soft focus fairytale'. Very nice.

[the_boy]

ooooo, hope i didn't steal it from somewhere then. reading a lot of poetry does that

Can't wait for next time

[travelinvoice]

Hey X! I had such a great time with you in Portland. I really look forward to you coming and visiting in Bend. We will have a great time on the camping trip. Your exerpt is filled with expression as most of your writing is. I can almost see myself in the moment. Talk to you soon.
Alex

Re: Can't wait for next time

[the_boy]

YEA we will! you're awesome, man, we'll make plans next time i see you on AIM.