49 - Stand-Off

Mar 22, 2010 10:09

Title: Stand-Off
Characters: Russia/America
Rating: PG-13
Summary: 1961 - The escalation of tensions between Russia and America following the construction of the Berlin Wall leads to a guns-drawn stare-down as the Berlin Crisis hits its peak.

TCE is co-written by wizzard890 and pyrrhiccomedy.

They stood twenty paces apart, guns out, aimed between each other's eyes, their feet square on the damp asphalt. )

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lunicole March 22 2010, 02:52:57 UTC
Yay ! First !

I loved it. Russia being all "Oh, that was not my decision ! It's Prussia's!" while keeping his gun aimed at America was nice and, well, so Russia. I liked the way they're still kids playing with way too much dangerous weapons and the "I remember when we were first getting to know each other, I thought you were so old and--and impressive..." just did it.

They just can't put their shit aside, can they ?

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pyrrhiccomedy March 22 2010, 03:01:28 UTC
Yay ! First !

Close, anyway. XD

I liked the way they're still kids playing with way too much dangerous weapons

It's kind of terrifying, isn't it? I mean, Russia is an old nation, yeah, but he didn't 'grow-up' until the mid-1700s, really, and become a modern and powerful state. (Actually, according to our canon, there was a 20-30 year span there when America and Russia were almost the same age.) And being a superpower is very new to both of them. And on top of all that--nobody has ever had the kind of power these two have at their disposal, now. I think that'd make anybody feel shaky and inexperienced.

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lunicole March 22 2010, 03:12:04 UTC
I was first when I started writing it XD! I'm just that bad in English, I guess...

And on top of all that--nobody has ever had the kind of power these two have at their disposal, now. I think that'd make anybody feel shaky and inexperienced.

I agree. They did not called this MAD for nothing. And...

The cuban missile crisis is next, right ? (We'll finally understand why Cuba hates America so much! Yeah!)

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pyrrhiccomedy March 22 2010, 03:14:09 UTC
I'm sure it's not your English! There's just always a bit of a race to first comment when we put up a new chapter. (God love you guys.)

The cuban missile crisis is next, right ?

It sure is.

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inner_wings March 22 2010, 03:11:25 UTC
I really, really love them both acknowledging that they aren't that old in the grander scheme of things, and that for all the things that have happened between them, not that much time has passed. I think that was my favorite part of this.

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pyrrhiccomedy March 22 2010, 03:16:53 UTC
On one level, they're both kind of...a couple of scared kids with way more power at their fingertips than they know what to do with. I think they're both a little terrified by just how fast things can escalate between them, and they're too young and nervy and proud to know how to back down gracefully.

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pyrrhiccomedy March 22 2010, 03:24:37 UTC
The Cold War is, overall, the fucked-up kind of romantic. XD I think it's safe to say that we're all Into That here.

Thank you, we're so glad you liked it! =D

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neocloud9 March 22 2010, 03:32:32 UTC
Gawd, it just keeps getting better EVERY TIME.

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pyrrhiccomedy March 22 2010, 03:37:08 UTC
Yay, I'm so happy you're enjoying the series! =D

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iota_espionage March 22 2010, 03:39:06 UTC
Wh-why am I getting this premonition that we'll be seeing Cuba and Turkey soon?

Russia was drawing himself up again, hand over hand up some dark internal pillar, and America thought maybe he might give a different answer now if somebody asked him if he was afraid. "I mean, I've always wanted to touch them," he pleaded. "And I never, ever would, without your permission, but--okay?

That part really got to me... having something on your body that serves as a permanent tie to trauma is enough, but having someone tell you that they think they're beautiful - it would only help to destroy your senses. Poor Russia...

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pyrrhiccomedy March 22 2010, 03:43:40 UTC
Wh-why am I getting this premonition that we'll be seeing Cuba and Turkey soon?

Because the boys just can't leave well enough alone. ._.

That part really got to me... having something on your body that serves as a permanent tie to trauma is enough, but having someone tell you that they think they're beautiful - it would only help to destroy your senses. Poor Russia...

Russia is such a mess when it comes to his scars. And you know, I think this is the first time America's ever said anything about them.

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iota_espionage March 22 2010, 03:46:13 UTC
Russia is such a mess when it comes to his scars. And you know, I think this is the first time America's ever said anything about them.

Oh, America... you and your secret fetishes with Russian neck-scars.

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pyrrhiccomedy March 22 2010, 03:47:26 UTC
Deep down, America may or may not be a hotbed of secret fetishes.

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