60 - Step Back

Sep 18, 2010 12:10

Title: Step Back
Characters: England/America
Rating: PG
Summary: 1968 - Irreconcilable differences don't come any more irreconcilable than the Vietnam War.

TCE is co-written by wizzard890 and pyrrhiccomedy.

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mahonsky September 18 2010, 19:24:03 UTC
OMG GUYS YOU ARE BACK!!!
Awesome, as always.

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wizzard890 September 18 2010, 21:36:01 UTC
Thank you so much~ =D

(Also, that icon is kind of spectacular.)

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aislingthegreat September 18 2010, 19:27:33 UTC
...Oww. That's basically what I was feeling through that whole argument.

Welcome back!:D

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wizzard890 September 18 2010, 21:36:42 UTC
It wasn't half as bad as we thought it might be, honestly. England was really cool about it. And America did himself proud.

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fallenxembers17 September 18 2010, 19:41:56 UTC
OMG YOU GUYS.
YOU'RE ALIVE.
and back with more gloriously heart-wrenching stuff. ♥
Oh, England. Good for you, man, sticking up against pouty America. Lord knows most couldn't do it.

(did I tell y'all that I got a 5 on European History? and re-read TCE as part of my review? ♥)

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wizzard890 September 18 2010, 21:38:46 UTC
WE ARE ALIVE. IT WAS TOUCH AND GO FOR A WIHLE THERE.

Man, I can feel for America. He's mired alone in an awful conflict, he's just had shrapnel dug out of his shoulder, it's fucking hot, and he's being broken up with. AGAIN. He's got every right in the world not to be a ray of sunshine right now.

(And a 5 on European History? Nice.)

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YOU'RE BACK!!! musubi7 September 18 2010, 19:48:12 UTC
Seriously, IRL, I gasped when I saw this update and almost fell out of my chair.

Gooooooooooood Morning, Vietnam!

Like all your other chapters, I adored this one for your style and quick dialog. Seriously, you guys would be great in screenwriting. I'll say this until you guys get tired of it or whatever, but the way you all write England just kills me because it's so good.

The last bit, is just. Aw, America you stupid little romantic boy.

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Re: YOU'RE BACK!!! wizzard890 September 18 2010, 21:42:05 UTC
Oh gosh, thank you so much! Dialogue is such a blast! I am always afraid I have a bit of a wooden ear for it, on my end of things, so I'm thrilled to hear that you think it plays so naturally.

And yes, England. England is a joy.

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Re: YOU'RE BACK!!! pyrrhiccomedy September 19 2010, 02:18:26 UTC
You do not have a wooden ear for dialogue, don't be a dork. ♥

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plushielover177 September 18 2010, 19:50:18 UTC
You know, I'll never understand how people can say you guys treat England badly. He's probably the only person I don't want to smack right now.

It's all down hill from here, isn't it? :C

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wizzard890 September 18 2010, 21:43:57 UTC
Oh gosh, thanks! Gotta love England~ But we would really rather not bring outside negativity into it, you know? We're just looking to tell a story. =D

Ninja edits~

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plushielover177 September 19 2010, 04:04:43 UTC
My bad, than. Sorry.

He's good at playing Only Sane Man. At least when everyone else is going crazy. :/

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wizzard890 September 19 2010, 04:14:07 UTC
Oh no, it was totally a slip-up on my part. Don't worry about it. <3

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