63 - En Prise

Sep 29, 2010 11:25

Title: En Prise
Characters: Russia/America
Rating: R, for sex.
Summary: 1972 - Fischer seals his lead against Soviet player Spassky in the Match of the Century, and Russia gives America an impromptu chess lesson.

TCE is co-written by wizzard890 and pyrrhiccomedy.

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neocloud9 September 29 2010, 19:15:35 UTC
Chess, breathplay and pitch-perfect characterizations? Girls, I think we have ourselves a winner here. ;)

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wizzard890 September 29 2010, 22:11:32 UTC
Gosh, thank you so much! The chess and the breathplay pretty much punched my ticked for good. XD

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excuse me while i am all over the place fujiappletan September 29 2010, 19:28:27 UTC
IT ONLY TOOK THOSE FIRST TWO LINES AND I WAS BEATING MY FIST AGAINST THE TABLE

god america you don't. you don't know shit about chess and then all i could think was this is the real reason why you are not with england he cannot bear to fuck anyone that calls the knights HORSES. HORSES oh my god i was slapping my knees dying of laughter when russia accused america of threatening spassky's family cause isn't that your thing russia-

but t-then the king (chess should be taught like this always oh dear lord) and how am i being coherent right now i am doing a good job aren't i fuck it when america licked that king i had to stop and take my GODDAMN SWEATER OFF nice to know the how is anyone still clothed sentiment was soon abandoned. holy hell russia going on and on about chess i can't skfjsg i kdjfldsfKJKJSDADHOT I'D LIKE TO KEEP THE REST OF MY CLOTHES ON KTHNX HOT nnnng and the bit on the bruises i love that kind of crap i love that sort of detail to death fml imagining russia rolling that 'r' when he kept saying rook is enough to make ( ... )

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Re: excuse me while i am all over the place wizzard890 September 29 2010, 22:29:32 UTC
First off, I love you. Second off, your comments have me on the floor, every time. And third off, I am officially designating this icon for replying to you, as of last chapter. <3

when america licked that king i had to stop and take my GODDAMN SWEATER OFF nice to know the how is anyone still clothed sentiment was soon abandoned.

I SERIOUSLY DID THAT. OH MY GOD. We wrote this on monday night, and it was freezing cold in my room, so I was wearing a sweatshirt, and when we got to the licking bit, I was all: *look both ways...UNZIP.* Because my goodness, they know how to crank up the heat.

and the bit on the bruises i love that kind of crap i love that sort of detail to death

So do we. Like, the idea of Russia getting into bed at night and just pushing his fingers into the leftover marks-- Yes.

imagining russia rolling that 'r' when he kept saying rook is enough to make me go to my corner and very much because there is not one time I CANNOT
FUCKING WEEP

HOTTEST ACCENT. HOTTEST ACCENT EVER. America digs it so hard. Even though he ( ... )

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harusamemosuke September 29 2010, 19:45:56 UTC
He jerked America in an inch without looking at him. Snarled, "You drugged him, didn't you? Some kind of--of--CIA hallucinogenic and you're cheating with it--"
Nice to know Russia's paranoia is alive and well! :D This made me giggle so hard, I just can't help myself. I mean, we were just as bad, which makes funnier? Somehow? I'll be quiet now

Also, I never thought I'd even remotely like breathplay. It was sweet in the last chapter, and now it's hot and I don't know why. XD

"Oh my God--" America buckled up against him. He jerked his knees open wide. "--You are not gonna start in on that whole 'chess is the embodiment of the Marxist-Leninist system' with me, because, okay, there is a no communist propaganda in the bedroom rule, starting right now--" He kicked his shoes over the footboard and dragged his hands into Russia's hair.

I think this is my favorite paragraph in the whole thing. I am weird. I know. It's perfect, though XD

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wizzard890 September 29 2010, 22:31:50 UTC
Nice to know Russia's paranoia is alive and well!

Russia's paranoia is always alive and well. France once described Russia as being "afraid of everything", and he's kind of absolutely right. Everything except physical pain.

I think this is my favorite paragraph in the whole thing.

It's definitely my favorite line. Aria wrote it, and the minute it popped up on my screen, I was in stitches.

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artist September 29 2010, 20:20:26 UTC
I..giggled at America's ignorance of chess. Seriously that whole bit is just love.

And good breathplay? The fandom needs so much more of this! ♥

Great job guys!

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wizzard890 September 29 2010, 22:32:33 UTC
Neither of us had to feign ignorance of chess. Wikipedia got a hell of a workout, this chapter. XD

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pyrrhiccomedy September 30 2010, 00:49:14 UTC
This has nothing to do with anything but oh my God, how did you get that username? That's amazing.

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artist September 30 2010, 01:12:31 UTC
It was purged and I jumped on it faster than white on rice. XD Nothing spectacular.

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hellzabeth September 29 2010, 20:32:35 UTC
Shit.

I can't ever play chess again now guys.

I am in a chess club.

This will be awkward.

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wizzard890 September 29 2010, 22:33:40 UTC
Oh, how delightful. XD Just don't ever play a blindfolded match. It will be unbearably kinky.

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pyrrhiccomedy September 30 2010, 00:22:41 UTC
--They have what now?

What?

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wizzard890 September 30 2010, 00:34:38 UTC
Blindfolded chess! The players either wear blindfolds or put thier backs to the board, and then call out their moves. And they have to remember where all the pieces are.

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