Comments | the_coconut_dog: Stupid reviewers and 5awesomegays

the_coconut_dog

Stupid reviewers and 5awesomegays

Oct 04, 2008 23:02

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urulover_427 October 4 2008, 22:20:07 UTC

How absolutely rude! For one, if this guy is some better than us writer, what is he doing reading fanfiction on livejournal? And two...what an ass!

*goes to his house and kicks his ass*

the_coconut_dog October 5 2008, 08:19:59 UTC

I know! I told him that just because he has a book published, doesn't mean that he is a better person. He said; Yes, I am and well aware of that..
Really. How sad is he, arguing with a sixteen year old and then not even bothering to give me substantial answers.

urulover_427 October 5 2008, 10:27:50 UTC

I would ask him what the title of his book is, steal it - because you don't want to support this guy financially. I would just give him another reason to gloat - AND BURN IT!!!

BWA HA HA HA!!!

*evil laughter with thunder and lightning*

the_coconut_dog October 5 2008, 17:18:16 UTC

Hahha! That is an amazingly evil plan, which could work IF I lived in the US XD

lash_larue October 4 2008, 22:45:26 UTC

“Oh Merlin…” Harry groaned, as Malfoy gripped tighter. “The name is Draco, dear.” Draco smirked into his skin. “Fuck, Draco….faster!” Harry whined pathetically, writhing against the wall. “With pleasure…” And then Draco picked up the speed. Harry had never felt anything like this, it was far better than wanking, and before long, he felt his toes curl in his shoes and his vision went white (so did Malfoy’s hands). He happily slumped against Malfoy, who was grinning at him. It was quite a sight to behold.

There is the paragraph with two people speaking in it. There are a couple of punctuations that I might have done differently as well.

None of this changes the fact that this guy is a dick. Likely a very small one.

L

the_coconut_dog October 5 2008, 08:21:47 UTC

Yeah, that does read a bit annoying, but my beta fixed my story so I figured it was all right? But anyway, thanks for reading and giving your opinion!

myrags October 4 2008, 23:30:42 UTC

that guy sounds like an ass! i don't see how 'righting' is a pun on 'writing', either! like one time someone left me a comment on youtube saying "are you mentally challenged or just retarted" so i said "nice spelling" and they replied "that was clearly a joke"! i mean, how is that a joke?! he clearly spelt it wrong & wanted to cover up.
this guy sounds like an idiot. give us the link to his page :p

the_coconut_dog October 5 2008, 08:23:31 UTC

Okay, I'll edit it and then put up the link. He has one story on FF.
Here is the link anyway
http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1649596/

His screen name is so sad.

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the_coconut_dog October 5 2008, 08:26:00 UTC

Indeed he must. His screen name is GothGuyinDenial.
Er..He should be brutally murdered just for that.