FIC: ST RPS -- Turnabout Intruder in My Pants (5/7)

[the_deep_magic]

Title: Turnabout Intruder in My Pants (5/7)
Author: the_deep_magic
Pairing: Pinto
Rating: PG-13 (NC-17 overall)
Word Count: 2,701
Warnings: crack, overused fandom trope, a bit o’ angst
Disclaimer: so very, very untrue
Summary: bodyswap!fic
A/N: It’s a Halloween treat!

Comments

[beederiffic]

*incoherent babbling*

I. AM. SO. FRICKIN'... THERE IS NOT EVEN A WORD FOR WHAT I AM RIGHT NOW.

Make the vinaigrette a balsamic one and I'm so all over that. And, Chris, no short stories? Say it ain't so. You're breaking my heart here.

I think more touching might help them. Much, much more (naked) touching. Chris (a.k.a ME) needs to know what his ass looks like nude.

[the_deep_magic]

And, Chris, no short stories? Say it ain't so. You're breaking my heart here.

Okay, you caught me -- it's really an AU.

[shutterbitch]

I squeed HARD when I saw you updated this! I went back to read the whole thing again just because it was so good anyway, and I wanted to make sure I remembered everything.

Yes boys, you need to get closer and obey the magnetic pull.

This may be a plot trope, but I love what you've done with it. LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT.

It’s his body, dammit. He’s supposed to be able to put his hands on his hips when he’s frustrated. Zach isn’t supposed to be licking his lips without even realizing he’s doing it.

I reread that line several times, knowing your emphasis points, but also playing around with which 'he' is behind the pronouns, and it's just... gold. That right there is GOLD.

Go ahead Chris, lick your lips. Put your hands on your own hips (and ass and everywhere else). I DARE YOU.

[the_deep_magic]

D'awww, thanks! And I totally had fun with confusing pronouns...

[the_deep_magic]

WHEN IN DOUBT, GO SLAPSTICK. Hasn't failed me yet.

[eefreeboo]

I saw this when I first got up this morning and it's killed me to have to wait until now to read it. Very much worth waiting for though, both the 8 months and the day, and can't wait for the rest :D

[the_deep_magic]

Very much worth waiting for though, both the 8 months and the day

Awww, you're too sweet. Glad you liked it!

[less_star]

*dolphin noises* So happy to see more of this!

[the_deep_magic]

I'm so glad to have induced dolphin noises... I think!