A Poem. Comment, pretty please!

[the_disco_fairy]

Round and round
     and round
         and square
       I once was here
                     but
               never
          there
Don't try to follow
    the
        curves
            of this
                 rhyme
  Your back might break
And your eyes may bleed
                       All I
               Need Is
           Time

Earth wind water

Comments

[kelshei]

In a word? Awesome! I love the visual image of the poem on the page. It adds to the undulation of the rhyme/rhythm. The imagery is good, too. Love it!

[the_disco_fairy]

Thank you!