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the_empiricist

you know i'd still take you home

Aug 08, 2011 13:34

title: You Know I'd Still Take You Home
author: beanarie
pairing: Arthur/Eames/Ariadne, and every permutation therein
word-count: ~7,800
rating: R
warning: Includes lots of things I don't endorse, like misogynistic language, violence, drug use, hints of child abuse and underage sex-work. Also slight futzing with canon/actors' ages (Ariadne is in her late ( Read more... )

ariadne/arthur/eames, arthur/eames, i like dominic cobb and i am not ashamed, bummed cigarettes au, fic, inception

Comments 10

laria_gwyn August 10 2011, 00:34:19 UTC

You posted it and it's wonderful! <333 I love how they're dancing around each other and how everything is painful and exhilarating all at once. Your dialogue is so, so good, so real and grounded. Love this, bb, love this so much.

PS There is a small formatting error with the italics.

the_empiricist August 10 2011, 01:27:38 UTC

I should have known you'd be the first. <3 akjdhk Yes, I posted at long last. I'm the least productive person in this entire fandom, I swear. I had a lot of fun playing around with the different group dynamics, figuring out what makes each of them tick and how they talk to each other. I'm really glad that it worked for you.

Fixed the mangled html (Ugh, the first damn time I didn't double check after I posted). Thanks so much for the head's up there, Laria.

krytella August 11 2011, 07:34:18 UTC

I love the way you slowly unfold their histories and the complexity of the relationships. Very intense. And so glad you gave the three of them a hopeful ending!

beanarie August 11 2011, 20:26:09 UTC

Thank you for the lovely review. I'm glad that the interplay of the different timelines worked for you. Haha I so didn't mean for it to be angsty. It just sort of evolved that way.

clair3 August 11 2011, 15:53:50 UTC

lovely!

beanarie August 11 2011, 20:17:41 UTC

Thank you for reading. I'm glad you liked it. :)

gollumgollum August 12 2011, 10:21:17 UTC

Oh man. Got to see the cute medic all day AND new, awesome fic? Today was a total win! This was sweet, the way they all realized they were fighting themselves instead of each other. (Maybe not Ariadne. She seems more self-aware than the boys.) Love it, bb.

the_empiricist September 7 2011, 02:52:21 UTC

Watch as I respond to your review of a fic you've probably forgotten you even read. THANK YOU K8. <3 Yeah, the boys were kind of a mess? :) Weirdly I had the most trouble writing from Ariadne's POV. Well-adjusted people don't give me much to grab onto.

gollumgollum September 7 2011, 17:02:56 UTC

No worries, it means i got to read it again! And yeah, Ariadne is possibly the only not-broken person in the whole movie. She can be tough sometimes.

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the_empiricist September 7 2011, 03:00:10 UTC

Wow, thank you. That's really high praise. There are some pretty incredibly threesome fics out there.