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Fic: Feel

Oct 27, 2005 01:24

Title: Feel
Author: akahannah
Rating: Somewhere between PG-13 and R
Warning: Death of a non-central character
Scenario: #2 Draco to Harry: I promise to sleep with you soon.
Summary: In which Draco reminisces and Harry helps him remember how to feel.
Author's Notes: Written for the second wave of the_eros_affairThis is not the fic I set to write out for this ( Read more... )

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Comments 13

geoviki October 27 2005, 00:42:08 UTC

Oh, how gorgeous was that?!! It just had such an immediacy to it - the first person perspective just pulled me right in and seemed to keep me in Draco's brain the whole time. Good job!

akahannah October 27 2005, 08:47:47 UTC

Thank you so much! First person tends not to be a very popular choice among readers, so I was really concerned this wouldn't work. Sincerely, I am so glad you liked this!

fcmwt_r_do October 27 2005, 01:07:50 UTC

aw. that was so cute!

gah, more soon?

akahannah October 27 2005, 08:50:33 UTC

:) Thanks.

No more of this particular fic, but I try to write a couple of stories a month.

drusillas_rain October 27 2005, 01:20:13 UTC

oh, this was breathtaking

akahannah October 27 2005, 08:51:01 UTC

Thank you so much!

fiona_fawkes October 27 2005, 01:32:22 UTC

Oh, that was so very nice. I agree with geoviki, I really felt myself drawn into the story. Love and hugs for you with regards to your loss. My grandfather recently passed away as well. I'm glad to hear that writing is helping you.

akahannah October 27 2005, 08:53:14 UTC

I'm glad you felt drawn in, it's been a long while since I've written first person perspective, so I definitely felt a bit rusty.

Sorry to hear about your grandfather. :( Writing is a definite help, it gives me a place to let go and be more emotional than I am in irl (one of the unfortunate side-effects of being a reserved Brit :D)

urnesha October 28 2005, 11:33:48 UTC

wow. I almost never read first person stories but I didn't even realise that this was one until it was mentioned in the comments, I was just so absorbed in the story. Fabulous work. Glad that it was a way of release for you, sorry about your grandmother.

akahannah October 28 2005, 20:11:04 UTC

First person is a bit of a red-headed stepchild in fandom, isn't it? I almost wanted to change this, because I knew it wasn't going to get a huge volume of reviews (not that it's just about the reviews, but you know what I mean) and I'm so glad I didn't. People have really been responding to this in a way that's just touched me so much. So thank you so much for your review. I'm glad you enjoyed the fic.