Fic: Contact, NC17-ish

[kabeyk]

Title: Contact
Author: kabeyk
Rating: Adult-y. Mild porn.
Disclaimer: Not mine.

Summary: It's a purely business arrangement.
Notes: Cheque #21 - Harry to Draco: I promise to sleep on the wet patch. I was drunk when I claimed this, for which I blame scoradh. Much love to the gorgeous wildestranger for reading this through.

Comments

[sheafrotherdon]

oh hell - I've no idea what that got to me as hard as it did (perhaps the contrast of all that early desperation with the end, and such telling vulnerability?) but nnnnnnngh. That was fantastic.

[kabeyk]

How did you read that so fast? I'm sure I only posted it two seconds ago, heh.

Thank you, though, I really need some confidence for this one, I hardly ever write H/D and I'm all a-wibble. Thank you.x

kxx

[sheafrotherdon]

I am a dastardly fast reader, especially when compulsively refreshing my flist instead of grading the papers sitting on my coffee table ;)

I'm amid my own first full length H/D too, so - yeah, I know the wibble feeling. But I would never have guessed this was your first H/D - they feel very solid, totally believeable charactertizations, and a haaappy ending, for which I am a sucker ;)

[kabeyk]

Heh, it's amazing what you can do when procrastinating.

Full length, argh, you brave thing! I barely managed 2,000 words! And thank you, because I'm never sure with characterisations of characters I don't write often. Oh, you've made me feel so much better.x

kxx

[zionsstarfish]

If I'm paying for this, Harry thought, turning his head to the side and clenching his fingernails tightly into the hips he held, why can't I have a bit more? But then god knows how much a proper, neat kiss on the lips would be, and the price of a cuddle afterwards was probably more than even Malfoy could afford.

gah. The story feels right to me... that they *will* end up in this dilapidated cabin sometime down the road, giving in to each other in just this way.

You have a wonderful way with words.

[kabeyk]

Aw, thank you, that's such a lovely thing to say.x

kxx

[muchspork]

i also really liked that bit too, just btw.

whole story is fantastic. in fact, i've been reading some of your stuff. YOU are fantastic, kabeyk :D

[seedyapartment]

Ah, this was so perfect. Exactly what Harry and Draco should be. Angry and rough, but not really, and soft at the edges and guh. So hot.

You are amazing.

[kabeyk]

Angry and rough, but not really, and soft at the edges

Thank you! And that is such a perfect description of how I would see H/D too.

Thank you.x

kxx

[ressa6778]

AHHHHH!!! this makes me like this pairing. I could so totally see this happening. You are a dangerous person to have on a flist. Good thing I like danger. *wink*

[kabeyk]

Heh, like a bit of danger, eh? *winks back*

But aw, thank you.x

kxx

[stellastars]

Oooh! That was fantastic! The interactions between Harry and Draco were great. Plus, you write an excellent Draco, with just the write mix of snottiness and vulnerability.

Two lines that I really loved...
...if he went round the houses delivering classified information like a twinkle-eyed milkman... -- I loved the image.

The idea of sex in a bed was becoming as enticing and fetishistic to him as the thought of rough-and-dirty-with-the-wall-digging-into-your-spine probably was to bored married couples. -- not that I'm in a position to really know, but that strikes me as very, very true.

[kabeyk]

I actually really like writing Draco, and I've no idea why I don't do it more often. He's just so nasty and pathetic, and somehow cool and comedic all at once. And he's pretty, heh.

Heh, you win the prize for quoting back my favourite line! It made me think of that episode of Father Ted with the milkman in, heh. (If you can remember the milkman's name I will love you forever, because I just can't get it, argh.)

Hee, thank you. You definitely win and the quoting thing.x

kxx

[stellastars]

Yay for prizes!

Actually, as an American, I'm not familiar with "Father Ted." However, (with the offer of undying love!) I tried looking it up... Now, I've no clue if this is right, but my source says there was a milkman on the show with the name Pat Mustard... Is that correct?

[kabeyk]

Yes! *love*

Oh, I know, I should just google these things myself, before they drive me crazy. Thank you! Oh, you should watch it, it's funny. The milkman is shagging everyone, and there's lots of suspiciously hairy babies at the baby show. Hee.

Sorry. Thanks!

kxx