Fic: When Memories Fade Away (Harry/Draco, R)

[ex_pixystick865]

Title: When Memories Fade Away
Author: incognito
Rating: R
Pairing: Harry/Draco
Word Count: 1559
Summary: “Thank you.” Harry murmured, and he traced his hand across Malfoy's jaw for the smallest second. When he stepped back, he wondered if he had imagined the moment, and his stomach tightened in longing.
Cheque #72: Draco to Harry: I promise I'll do

Comments

[fiona_fawkes]

*sigh* Very nice interpretation of the challenge. I liked how you used details only when necessary. The lack of play-by-play for the sex made the details of kisses and touches that more intense. One thing, though. Shouldn't it end with them walking into the sunrise? Not the sunset.

[ex_pixystick865]

Thank you so much! I'm really glad you liked this and that you thought it worked.

And yes, you are absolutely right. Thanks so much for pointing that out - I really appreciate it! :)

[shikishi]

Very nice and an interesting use of the line.

Thanks!

[ex_pixystick865]

Thank you so much! I'm very glad you liked it. :)

[anonymous]

nice done! i really enjoyed it. thank you.pag

[ex_pixystick865]

Thank you so much! :)

[furiosity]

aklsdfjklasdjf omg!! I loved it. It doesn't deal with some of the canon red-flags (Ginny and Harry's feelings for her being one of them) but it works really well the way you've drawn it. <333 loff.

[ex_pixystick865]

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omg you!!!! <3333333333333333

mweehee, yes i totes ignored them. :"> <333333 thank you!! ♥♥♥

[waxbean]

this is beautiful -- and very hot, too. I like the way you've written their urgency!

I had a craving for some H/D tonight... and I'm glad I find it in one of yours!

xoxoMary