short;but xplains alot

[the_extinct]

im trying to make up a poem or whatever..that could be the lyrics to me and brookes band....::giggle,giggle:: so i havent thought of a title yet.and im not done with this "poem" so when you leave a comment if you do give me a suggestion of a title....and your opinion...

trapped between walls

hidden behind doors

trying to find you;hearing calls

Comments

[xcharityleex]

That is a good poem! ,,,keep them coming!!!!!!!!!!

[the_extinct]

thanx....got ne suggestions for a title??

[xcharityleex]

how about [trapped]

[gloriaxgale]

Hello I'm a friend of Charity's ,I red your poem over ,and over ,and thought well maybe the title of it could be..Trapped ,or Looking for a way out. It was just a thought..