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D/G Feast Story: Things Unseen

Jan 29, 2005 19:04

Title: Things Unseen
Author: Nicole Lynn
Rating: PG-13
Recipe: Chocolate Chip Pumpkin Muffins, Mint Chocolate Brownies

Summary: She never noticed him.

( Story: Things Unseen )

Comments 5

dragonsangel68 January 30 2005, 08:38:37 UTC

Wonderful! I enjoyed this so much. Poor Draco, everyone thinking he was playing for the other team *giggles*

ladylestat January 30 2005, 13:08:41 UTC

I really liked this story. :) The way it was written and set-up was wonderful. Hehe :)

selinakyle47 January 31 2005, 19:26:41 UTC

Very cute! :D

sarea_okelani February 1 2005, 02:27:24 UTC

Haha, Ginny and Draco both thinking the other in love with Harry. Classic! And all too believable. I actually really liked this bit of Draco's characterization:

he smirked and preened as if it was his due.

But the truth of the matter is that he was shocked.

I think that's far more canon than fanfic normally portrays Draco ... which is refreshing to see. I don't particularly have any problem with either characterization, but it's nice to see an uncertain Draco once in awhile, particularly one who still tries to keep up the facade of being an almighty Malfoy.

Thanks for sharing this with us!

sabacat February 24 2005, 09:27:44 UTC

This was so sweet and funny! A bit of an angsty misunderstanding with it all working out into a happy ending. Perfect! ^__^