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First Prize Fic: Gaco and Drinny

Mar 09, 2005 02:04

Title: Gaco and Drinny
Author: Jade Okelani
Email: jadeokelani[at]gmail.com
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Draco and Ginny have one hell of a day.
Notes: Many thanks to sarea_okelani for the invaluable beta, and general hand holding, far past her bedtime. This fic would be nothing without her; and to ropo for the Best Title Ever. She'll be so tickled I've mentioned her ( Read more... )

Comments 11

mynuet March 9 2005, 12:31:33 UTC

LOVE! I love how you took the frivolous cliches I gave you and made an awesome story out of them. :D This line: His eyes were like a terrible storm, and she realized that, beyond all reason, she had actually hurt him by wanting him the way she'd believed him to be. gave me butterflies.

Teeny, tiny nitpick before I go on to read the other story on MM - did you mean he has Hungarian soup in his closet, or perhaps spellcheck tripped you up when you were typing galoshes?

endorwitch March 9 2005, 15:50:29 UTC

wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1111
awesome awesome fic!!!!!!!!!!!!!

so going into he memories!

now i must sleep.....to dream of my otp getting it on! WOO!

amethystfantasy March 9 2005, 16:45:50 UTC

what the f*ckkkkkkk!!!!! that was one of the nicest fics ever!!!! i just love the lines! i want more! is it possible??? it was really so good. and the lines were delivered so well. i am nothing but speechless and can only repeat over and over how nice it is. :D:D:D

selinakyle47 March 9 2005, 19:20:01 UTC

What an amazing story! Your use of the required elements was wonderfully ingenious.

anonymous March 9 2005, 21:04:07 UTC

i'm a lurking reader and fan of your stories .. and i'm also quite hazy today, so i have tons of tiny little questions if you don't mind ^.^. i normally would probably understand, but um, i just don't. so sorry for this inconvenience.

"You're not wearing that charcoal suit you picked out," Draco elaborated. "It's for the funerals of family members I've never really liked."

"So family, then," Ginny said smartly.

"Hmm," Draco murmured. "Someone's gotten nastier in the last day and a half."

i just don't get how Ginny's line connects to his line, and how it makes sense ... or how it's even a nasty comment?

"Vanessa and I had planned an assignation last night; Vanessa thought we were to meet somewhere other than my flat, where I was waiting for her ( ... )